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Unconditional Love!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Rith, Feb 20, 2019.

  1. peddadas

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    oh who is this Jayalakshmi in between .. oh..then now i am clear Meera and her office manager..Prasaana and Jaya ..Guna ahas to compromise..:tonguewink:
     
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    May be a villain to this story. Hahhaaa Keep guessing dear. Posted the next episode
     
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    Episode 10:

    Prasanna fell short of words. Though his mind threw lot of statements and questions to produce to her, his throat censored everything making the travel in silent mode.

    Okay. I need some more time to anlayse and confirm what I am going through. Let me not rush and spoil everything before this buds. I want to talk to her, spend some time with her, know about her and let me come to a conclusion. I am attracted to her, yes! But I should validate my decision as this costs my life. Her eyes are not false though those are not helping me in reading her mind.” Prasanna’s mind and heart had a spicy debate

    Though he seem to be good, I can’t reveal where I stay exactly. He offered a help. so? Should I trust him completely? I should control myself. Let me alight nearby and reach my home by walk. Let me not reveal my actual residence. What am I doing? I am blushing, I am admiring him, I am afraid I will fall for him. Without completely knowing about a person, how can I fall for a person. Aaarrgggg, my heart urges to see him again and again” Jaya closed her eyes to control her thoughts. “Come on mind. Don’t run here and there. He is just a stranger. Don’t go behind him. Come on. Do not wander here and there. Stay with me. Stay under my control” she took a deeeeeep breath.

    “Oh my god! This girl is making me go crazy with her reactions” Prasanna coughed which bought Jaya back to reality. She smirked at him.

    “Err..Sorry for disturbing you from your dreams. Just want to know where you are staying so that I can drop you. We have almost reached and it is just 10 minutes from here to my home”

    “Ohhh?” her face wore a pack of tension “Can you please stop near that auto stand. I am staying nearby”

    “Are you sure?” asked Prasanna seeing her tensed face

    “Yes. Pakka” reverted Jaya took her handbag signaling to stop

    His heart skipped a beat and cursed himself for 2 reasons. 1)for driving the car too fast as their travel comes to an end 2) fighting within himself and hence lost in thoughts so couldn’t talk anything much

    When will I meet you again? Though he managed to smile, a slight pack of craving was evidently visible in his eyes which she caught easily. She had an adrenaline rush. A sweet current passed all over her body. Neither she nor him made a damn move. They stood in their respective seats as a statue looking deep into each other’s eyes, of course without their knowledge. She, kind of melted on the love in his eyes: he, kind of a longing child crying for going back to its mother from school. There is no lust; No dirty thoughts; no fake allures; still not sure which attracted each other towards them. Something trying to bond them but though they wanted to bind themselves in each other they still seek some time for themselves to confirm what they want to do is right or not.

    Not sure how long they sat like that. They were brought to reality when the police man knocked the car bumper hard with his stick. She startled as usual. She wet her lips and swallowed her fear. In a jiffy she jumped out of the car and flee from that place as fast as she could. Prasanna cursed the policemen and drove towards home. The policeman made talks on them in a lethargic manner and walked away.

    Jaya held her bag so tightly. Her face has become red. She wanted to turn back to notice the car but she was lack of dare. She walked, ran and walked and ran all the way smiling. “Cheeee…noooo…how can I stay gawking a stranger like this. Why did I do that? Is he a stranger? No. He is a thief..sweet thief..he is stealing my little little heart…oh. no! He is doing something to me. I going mad. Is this crush or love? I am still skeptical to call this as love. Whatever it is, should I allow to grow? ” She hit her head with her bag and covered her face. Whenever she thought about gazing at him for minutes, she felt a slight embarrassment which sparked blush turning her face pink. “I am not meeting that guy again. I am afraid where this will end in. OMG, what is his name?” she stopped abruptly and took her phone to continue the search in google she left half way. But she immediately closed the browser and deleted the search history. “This is not right. I should not do this. AND I AM NOT DOING THIS” she said to herself and walked fast towards her home determined that not to meet him again in her life

    Prasanna went through same reaction. He felt light. After normal enquiries and usual teasing with his family he enacted a busy drama with his laptop so that he could escape to his room. Closing the doors he threw the laptop on the sofa and sat on the bean bag. He stretched his legs placing his hands behind his head. His mind kept on reiterating the ride with Jaya.

    How bad, its not as true as the movies are showcasing the silence between the two loving heart as equivalent to one lakh words. No…Absolutely no. words are more powerful than anything. Does eyes can really depict our heart? Then I should look at her eyes. A bit startled, calm, kind eyes not conveying anything about me. How can I expect that she should feel what I feel about her?

    Okay, how I got such a feeling on her. Is that just because she became a reason for my family date. Nope…that’s just an accident.

    First time I didn’t feel anything. But when I met her again, some chemical reactions bobbled inside me. Why? What is this called. No, let me not use ‘L’ word now. It’s a budding love. Oops…again L word…Arey..allow me to think…No., its love…No its not…its love…its not…what is it then?...dint I find the same thing in her eyes…that moment when we forget ourselves…she gawped at me just like I did….so? she has the same feelings?Yes! She did…I should meet her often…I should know about her. I have to evaluate whether she would be my perfect soulmate who will take good care of me and my parents. what if she is committed already? No way, if she is committed she would not have gazed me like that.

    “Aaaarrrgggghhhh” he held his head with both the hands shutting his eyes“this is the worst feeling I ever had. This kills me but still I like it. I love this torture. I love you Jaya” he screamed looking at the ceiling. Then he chortled at himself. “If someone sees me like this, they will write a sureshot statement that I am a mad” saying he got up from bean bag and wandered inside his room.

    His room door was knocked. He opened to see Guna waiting with 2 big glasses and he smirked at him. Kalyani followed with a tray of savories Murukku and raw banana chips

    Prasanna raised his eyebrows to which Guna replied “Drinks party. Come, lets go to terrace. Today is a full moon day”

    “Done and deal” said Prasanna and followed them switching off the room lights.

    “Mom. How come you are allowing him to have one full glass of hot chocolate today” winked Prasanna

    “Sssshhh, shut up…she is in a good mood. Don’t spoil that with your loose talks” mumbled Guna and chided at Kalyani

    “I will give him a shot of insulin.” Said Kalyani winking at Guna

    Guna folded his lips and posed a sad face. They all laughed and went upstairs. Dad and son collided their hot chocolate glass and yelled “Cheers!” . Kalyani patted her head for their craziness and kept smiling at them. They spent their time by teasing each other and Guna’s romantic talks for which Prasanna pulled his legs and the night took its leave without an interest to leave the happy family but it has to do its duty paving way for Sun to spread its rays thereby illuminating the light throughout the world. The trio hit the bed late and they enjoyed late morning sleep as next day has been declared as holiday.


    Days passed. Jaya tried to stick to her seat rather than wandering around so that she can avoid meeting him. The more she wanted to avoid his thought the more and more she thought about him. He has completely occupied her mind. She could hardly concentrate on her work. The more she pushes herself to work, the more she has been distracted by his thoughts. She cursed herself; she laughed within her; she yelled within her; she floated in a completely different world from which she never want to come out, from which she never wanted to leave. She locked her system and came out of the building to catch up some fresh air. She was pretty sure that without clearing her mind, she would never be able to concentrate on her work. She sat on the stone bench stretching her left hand, placed her head on it and closed her eyes. The moment she and Prasanna stood frozen jumping deep into each other’s eyes flashed in her mind. She opened her eyes and sat straight with a jerk.

    “UUfff” she shook her head right and left. Again she leaned in the same posture closing her eyes. His face flashed again. This time she smiled. “So, you are going to keep on disturbing me, isn’t it?” she mumbled

    “Yes” she heard a reply

    “Who are you? Why are you doing this to me” she murmured without opening her eyes

    “What did I do?” came a reply in husky voice

    “Troubling me each and every minute. Not allowing me to do anything. Haunting me by your thoughts” she whispered

    “So, it is a YES?”

    “NO. No for a relationship, but Yes for a friendship. Lets be friends first. That’s better na? Yes! Friends” she smiled, beautifully when her eyes were closed still

    “I am fine. Friends?” she heard that voice this time very close, louder. She slowly opened her eyes which wide opened and she immediately jumped from the bench. She gasped and rolled her eyes seeing Prasanna sitting in front of her grinning at her, looking at her mischievously

    He caught her wrist when she was about to move. Her entire body shook. She rolled her entire fingers into her palm. “Don’t leave my hand” her inner voice screamed. “Leave my hand” her mouth delivered a different command

    He smirked and pulled her with force making her sit back on the bench. “You didn’t answer my question. So, the one who is disturbing you is me, right? ” he increased the grip smiling at her

    She tried to release her hand from his and turned her face unable to face him.

    “Friends??”he asked again

    She bobbed her head up and down trying to control her smile. Without talking his hands from her wrist, he grabbed her palm for a handshake. She shook and took back her hand as soon as possible. She then hid both her hands in her duppatta. He laughed at her act and stayed silently admiring her.

    She coughed “You belong to that building. How and why did you come here?”

    “For the past 2 days I am wandering here searching for………my friend” he chortled closing his mouth

    She gave a tight stare and turned her face right opposite direction to smile without his notice

    “I have seen you smiling, actually blushing” he leaned casually on the bench stretching his legs and waving his hands on the air

    “Aaaahemm” she adjusted her throat “Who is blushing? And what for. We are just friends” said Jaya looking sharp at his eyes

    “ummmhummmm?” he brought his face bit close

    She immediately jumped off from the bench and ran few steps backwards placing her hands behind “I have work. I have to leave. Bye” saying she started running

    “When is our next meet?” he screamed

    “Don’t know” she replied while running

    “I will wait here till you come back”

    what?” she stopped and turned back breathing heavily. He came near her. “I will wait in that bench till you come again. Take your own time to complete your work. But let’s go together”

    Jaya “I will leave late. Sometimes midnight”

    Prasanna “ even if its 1 AM, lets go together. I will wait for you”

    “See? You…” he interrupted her by showing his palm “I am not trying to flirt you Jaya. I like your company and you know” he shook his shoulders casually “I want to spend time with you. We can talk. Just talk. I have not forgotten the fact that we are just friends. I hope you forgot that’s why you hesitate to come with me. Do you?”

    She looked down.”Fine. I will come. But don’t wait here. I will call you by the time I leave” she turned back

    Prasanna “How will you call me without having my number?”

    She bit her tongue and turned again. She seized his phone from his hand and looked at him smiling sarcastically and typed her number and called. She gave back when she heard her phone ringing

    “Don’t call me during my work time” she said pointing her index finger at him

    “I wont. Trust me” he opened whats app and pouted “Oye! You have set some god photo as DP? Come on. Which era you are in?” he pat on his forehead and seized her phone. “Smile” he ordered and took a pic of her. He set that as her DP and gave her phone back “Go now. No need to be on rush. Leisurely complete your work and call me.”

    “Bye” she waved at him and walked back. As soon as she vanished from his sight she took the phone to save his number “Oops. I forgot to ask his name” she bit her lips. She searched his number in true caller and found his name as “Prasanna Narayanan”. She saved his number and opened Whatsapp. She saved his DP in her image gallery and ran her finger on his face. She felt chill all over her body. She blushed. She jumped on the stairs climbing 3 floors to her workplace. Anticipating the time she is gonna spend with him in the car, she started doing her work thinking about him. This time her mind was clear about their relationship. She waited till her friends leave. She felt super excited and so do Prasanna

    Around 9 PM she pinged Prasanaa. “Shall we meet now? I am done”

    Prasanna“Ok. Come to Block 11. “

    Jaya “Let’s have dinner here and start. I am damn hungry” she replied back

    Prasanna “We shall have outside

    Jaya “Hmm, no…let’s have here please

    Prasanna“Fine. Come soon to food court. I will wait in Wangs kitchen.”

    Jaya“Sure,Thanks”

    She collected her bag and hopped. Without having patience to wait for lift she leapt in the stairs leaving couple of steps. While nearing food court she stopped and walked slowly. Prasanna noticed all these from the distance and smiled at her.

    He waved his hand at her. She smiled and they went together in and sat comfortably. There were lot of people gathered there for dinner. They managed to grab a seat for themselves. The food court was little noisy.

    “So, all your work done?” Prasanna initiated the conversation

    “Yes! What about you? What were you doing till this time” she asked

    “Well, my presence is actually not needed in Block 11 site till I met you. My company is taking care of the interior décor of the entire building. Usually I use to come for review visit once in a month. Someone has turned upside down my schedule and I am here the entire day” he grinned sheepishly. She blushed and put her face down. Her cheeks pained for non stop smiling. They remained smiling at each other. It was clearly evident that they are enjoying being together

    “Ok, let me break the ice. Let’s know about each other first. Did you google about me?” she moved her head left and right as NO. He continued “Fine. I am running my own interior décor company. My company deals with doing interiors for star hotels, corporates etc., clean boy, complete tee totaller, no love attempts, no girls in my life till couple of weeks back” he smirked naughtily. He continued to talk about his family when her mobile beeped announcing a new mail. Nodding her head at him she opened the email which is an escalation email from the client for her work. None of his words fell on her ears. Looking at him often, made him to think that she is listening to him. But Jaya was shocked and concentrated completely on reading the email without showing that in her face.

    Her email read “Hi Jayalakshmi. The reports that you have generated for the financial year 2016-17 doesn’t have the requested data. Also the suggested formats were absolutely not present. Few primary factors were missing. This report is of no use for tomorrow’s review meeting. It is quite disappointing to have such an ambiguous data for top management meeting. Though the details have been clearly mentioned in the email and clarified all the doubts during the morning meeting, I am not clear what made you to generate such a useless report. I am afraid how long you are going to take to generate a new one and when this will be reviewed as we have stringent timeline to present to top management. I want this report to be completed tonight and let us review before the dawn of tomorrow to avoid any uncertainties”

    She held her head on her palm. She read the email again and again. “That’s it about me and my family. Now tell me about yours. Before that lets order something yar. Even I am hungry” she raised her head when Prasanna told this. He was browsing the menu card

    oh my my. I was completely lost myself in this email. What an embarrassment? I have never faced such situation in my life. Morning I didn’t work properly I know. I was submerged in his thoughts which has caused lot of issues in my work. Oh no…I have to stay back. I can’t go with him now.”Jaya’s thoughts

    “Hello! Are you in this world or not. Often you are floating in your dream land huh.” Prasanna waved his hand in front of her eyes

    “Huh! No…I need schezwan fried rice and fried pepper corns. Enough. You?” she spoke in a hurry

    He looked at her in conundrum. He then ordered food for them.

    He spoke about him which I missed to listen. How will I ask him to renarrate. That won’t look good. Couple of times he has asked me to tell about myself. Before he ask again, I have to say” Jaya’s thoughts

    Prasanna looked at her. “Hmm. So, rather than talking to others you like talking to yourself more, Is it?”

    She chuckled “Not like that. I will tell you why later. Between I am from a normal middle class family, single child, limited friends, book lover and of course no crush and boyfriend till a couple of weeks ago”. She winked

    They laughed together. Then they spoke about their likes, dislikes, interest, dream till they finish their food. Most of them matched and they felt happy about knowing about each other. They felt positive about their relationship. They walked besides each other towards Block 11 where Prasanna’s car has been parked. When Prasanna moved away from her to the drivers side, he came back and clutched her hand. She gave a puzzled look. She looked in all directions to see anyone notice them. Time was 10 PM and that was an underconstruction building so it was difficult to find people around. In other blocks people were there as most of the companies operate in shifts. He came near her and clasped her right hand between his hands. Her heart beat fast.

    What is going to happen now? She wondered, her lips chanting prayers

    To Be Continued…
     
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    Wonderful updates.....so Prasanna gonna propose her :hearteyes:
     
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    Thank you Ammu...Let see what happens
     
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    Rith
    Oye ore lovess thaan po
    (Are only love and love only)
     
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    offoo...love and love everywhere .. :clapclap:
     
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    Hey @Rith ... The story is going great..:clap2::clap2: waiting to read the next part.
     
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    Aama aama engeyum kadhal than
    (Yes yes it’s love everywhere)
     
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    He he yes.
     

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