Trying to heal your absence - dedicated to my mom

Bpremalatha · Apr 9, 2011

Eyes still searching around,
With rolling tears,without a sound.

Though heart knew, it would be in vain,
Do foolish acts, to reduce unbearable pain.

Tried to convince, impossibility of survival without thou,
You never took serious, ignored stating me as a fou,

Now, impossibilities is in front of me,
Unable to express you, my tears are true,

From day one, Its become a habit,
Awaiting your interference in all my bit.

Silently crying innermost to break my heart into pieces,
To burst out, so that I would heal your absences.

Malar2301 · Apr 11, 2011

Me too in the same situation...lovely lines that brought me tears....keep them coming!!

Bpremalatha · Apr 11, 2011

Thanks malar for the comment...
Should I keep coming tears or lines ... bit confused... kidding

milkshake · Apr 11, 2011

Hi,

Beautiful lines. I miss my mother very much after marriage and i want to see her. We are planning to go india this december. Am counting the days. I want to sleep on her. Her hands should touch my face. Am waiting for her hug... Amma where are you??

Regards,
Milkshake

Bpremalatha · Apr 12, 2011

Thanks Milkshake, for sharing your feeling..
Even I feel same.. I love her more than all......
Mother is itself lovely....

rgsrinivasan · Apr 15, 2011

A caring word, a gentle touch,
An always smiling face!
How can you trust me so much,
When I've not won always?

I learned to make those little sounds,
To you it could have been so divine.
Now I am searching all around,
For you, who's always been divine.

You never expected anything back,
But poured all your love to us.
When we realized and came back,
It was too late, you left us.

Well, I could continue more and more on this Premalatha. Nice lines of yours made me write this. Please accept my condolences. -rgs