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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by HazelPup, Jun 13, 2018.

  1. HazelPup

    HazelPup Platinum IL'ite

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    As I was reading through Gauri03 s response in how important is Time these thoughts came to my mind. Not sure if I can share in that thread so sharing it here.

    Time

    A beautiful beginning for all
    On a Clean Canvas

    As Life’s gentle and rough strokes
    Let us Paint a unique picture

    Bringing out the best
    In timeless beauty and classic art

    When the painting is done
    The Masterpiece is for display only

    Paint an artwork world will always see
    Even after the Time runs out
     
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  2. Gauri03

    Gauri03 Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    I kid you not I was reading your response in Geeta's thread yesterday and wondering why you didn't write poetry. Here you are today! Lovely poem! : )

    In the context of painting masterpieces one need not only look at a life time. We wake up with 24 promising hours on our hands. Every day is a clean canvas. If we fill it with color as best as we can, the masterpiece will paint itself.
     
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    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

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    A beautiful thought n expression, HP. You should write more.:clap2:

    Loved this line, Gauri. As we explore the depth of this line, we may surpass even the Mariana Trench!
     
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    periamma IL Hall of Fame

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    @HazelPup Good one about Time.A simple but meaningful poem.Write more
     
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    Nicely written. .Luved ur poem ..would like to read more of your poetries:thumbup:
     
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    Thanks Gauri

    yes true! Correctly said

    Thanks Geetha. If something comes to mind will share
    Thank you. Will try. Writing not my forte
    Thank you Star
     
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    GeetaKashyap IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear HP,
    Writing was never anyone's forte. Everyone discovered that they had something to say and a write-up was born. Some discovered it early and some late! My first write-up, 'Carmania' tumbled out just like that based on real experience in September 2014. Till then I never wrote anything other than letters! See already my writing journey is nearly 4 years old.:)

    Here is a platform to polish your skills. Use the opportunity. All the best.
     
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