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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by satchitananda, Apr 1, 2016.

  1. satchitananda

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    Dear Satchi

    Nice Story. I was woundering what will be mothers reaction when she meet Anita. Wow the way you took me .. great ma.

    Waiting for the next one ma.
    jillu
     
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    Beautiful narration. You have very well articulated the identity crisis of an adopted teenager. With gender discrimination atleast Anitha had a chance to live and grow up in a safe loving environment. In south indian villages kalli paal - cactus plant extract was used for female infanticide. Sensitive subject well presented
     
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    Excellent Narration and an awesome story. Thats really great. the climax is quiet justified. Wonderful narration Satchi mam. i loved it
     
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    Thanks Jilloo (@kanthaeikon) . :) My next one is already there: "Autumn sunshine"
     
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    So true jskls. It is better if people who do not want girls give them up for adoption to people who want one with all their hearts instead of killing them.
     
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    Thanks a lot Rith. :)
     
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    Wonderful narration... short and crisp but brings out all the emotions
    ... like someone else even I was wondering if there were some more parts.... adoption is very close to my heart..... wanted to adopt but my husband had opposite views.... so had to abandon my wishes... for me it kindled a lot of emotions. ....
     

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