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The quest

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by satchitananda, Apr 1, 2016.

  1. satchitananda

    satchitananda Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Vaidehi. Do read whenever you get the time. I do write occasionally whenever I get some ideas.
     
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    Good one!! I enjoyed!! :)
    Heart touching story on gender discrimination :) was able to feel it!! :)
     
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    wow! awesome satchi...
    Loved the way the story took off...the way Anitha's character was portrayed, a typical adopted teenager battling over her ethnicity , the way the story evolved around the intricacies of ancient old gender discrimination and then when you're at-last happy that she traced her roots, there again she's caught in her own dilemma of what to embrace and what not.
    emotionally entangling piece! way to go!!!
     
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  4. Rampuri9

    Rampuri9 Silver IL'ite

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    Heart touching story Satchi M'am.. the discrimination still happens in the modern india.
     
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    dear Satchi
    Nice story Anitas quest is well touched up...
     
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    Satchi heart touching story.
     
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    (deleted) (I ll repost my feedback to the story later) :oops:
     
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    S-nippets. S-napshots. S-tories. Hmmmm What's next S-atchi! ;) :p
     
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    Good one Satchi, and fast paced. Almost missed it, read as saw last post by kaniths and curiosity made me click. Is it completed or one more part coming up? (question is for Satchi, not kaniths :p)
    wounds never completely heal, and bygones are never completely bygones. the ability to visit 'healed' wounds and people from the past, without hurting self or others unduly, is a skill worth cultivating. As one of life's little ha ha's on those who live it - the skill is often mastered on the job. : )
     
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