Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Dec 8, 2016.
Is it.... I see
Wow this is a twist totally unexpected! I thought Zaheer is just going behind a girl but there is more to it huh!
Enjoy ur vacation and spend ur time with ur loved ones. v will wait .....
Thats very sweet!!!
Jaanu couldn’t believe what she heard.
Is this really Zaheer?
She just walked down the steps and pulled Zaheer. Gave an angry stare at his tensed face and gave a tight slap. Her anger was so high that she pushed him down and kicked him hard.
Jaanu opened her eyes. She really wanted to do all these things to Zaheer. But becoming emotional at such situations are the worst things that anyone can do she thought.
She slowly walked back the steps without making any noise. “Yeah I will delete that pic in FB now. Don’t worry. We will be safe” Jaanu heard him saying this to his friend. She felt like his friend his very much scared on the other side and Zaheer continued to console him.
Before Zaheer reached his desk, Jaanu ran away to her desk and took her mobile. Logged into her account and checked Zaheer’s profile.
She checked all his pictures and there was nothing abnormal. She checked again and again making sure Zaheer is not at his desk.
Jaanu continued scrolling the pictures. Someone called her and Jaanu stopped scrolling. She kept her mobile as such and leaves. When she comes back, the mobile was as such. It was a pic in which Zaheer was with his friend.
Two guys were posing for a selfie. Jaanu observed it once again and she figured out that the picture was cropped. She felt someone was standing along with them. She couldn’t find who it was. But there was ring visible in the picture. A ring in the index finger. Same blue sapphire!!! Jaanu thought. It was the one Mano gifted her and she always likes to wear it on her index finger.
“My God!!! Then Chaaru is the one who is sitting beside these guys! But how come? Chaaru would have told me if Zaheer was her friend….I never knew they were friends…”
Jaanu felt as if she will collapse in confusion. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Her mind calmed and she focused her wavering thoughts into a single point.
But as far as I know, Zaheer was very good and calm. He really does such works? And what for ?
Jaanu was immersed in her thoughts and Rathna came near her.
“Hey Jaanu! I need the file password.”
“Its In the last page of my notepad.” – Jaanu again went into her own world.
Rathna took the notepad and checked the last page for password. She was looking at the password and all of a sudden she dropped the notepad down as Sandhya pinched her hard from behind.
“You idiot” – Ratna gave a knock on her head and bent to take the notepad. Her eyes were looking at what has been written
4. The one who follows me
5. Chaaru's brother.
Sandhya pulled Ratna’s hand for fun and stood as such seeing the reaction in Ratna’s face.
"What happened?" Sandhya asked and Ratna showed her the notepad. Both looked at Jaanu and Jaanu felt guilty.
“Am….Am….Really sorry…!!! Dnt want to hurt you people…..” Jaanu said in a low voice.
“I will clear your doubt. Don’t worry.” Saying this she took her phone
“Khaveer! Can you join me for lunch today?! I feel like having with you” – Rathna
“Sure! 1 o clock sharp” – saying this she kept her phone on the desk.
“I dnt want to hurt you in anyway Rathna” – Jaanu said looking at her eyes
“Not a problem! After all a girl’s life is more important than these things” saying this Rathna left the place.
“Ram is not like that Jaanu! I am sure about that. If you want I will bring him to you ad you can question him! I know him well. In fact from my college days…You know that too” – Sandhya
“No No….Not needed Sandy!!!” – Jaanu replied with guilt
“Its up to you. I am ready to bring him. So that atleast your doubt will get resolved” – saying this Sandhya left the place.
Jaanu kept both her hands on her head and sat.
“God!!! All because of my stupidity!!! Hurted my friends” – she murmured.
It was 12.55 and Khaveer was already waiting outside. Rathna walked outside the main gate and both started walking towards a nearby restaurant and reached in few minutes.
“What shall we order my pretty darling?” – Khaveer’s face was bright and peppy
“A fried rice is fine for me” – Rathna replied shortly
“That’s it huh?! You said you want to have lunch with me and now just one fried rice? Too bad” – He replied with fake anger.
“Fine! Lets start ordering. One American chopsy for me.” – Khaveer said as he closed the menu.
“Khaveer! Let me come to the point. Do you know any Chaaru?” – Rathna asked looking at his eyes.
Khaveer’s face changed at once and asked “No! why?”
“Really you don’t know any Chaaru?!!!” – This time the firmness in her voice was more than before.
“Come on!!! What happened to you?” – Khaveer
“Just say yes or no” – She raised her voice slightly
“God!!! Let me bring end to this!! Yes Rathna!!! I know her.” – Khaveer said in a serious tone!
Finished reading all the chapters at once.. Too many characters couldn't suspect anyone.. You are very good at maintaining suspenses and making the readers to break their heads
"She got down from her scooter and pretended to kick her scooter hard…...."
This was very thoughtful of Jaanu, I really appreciate the presence of mind of this character you have created. Today girls really need such tactfulness to deal diffult situations.
It is like.. "Everyone is involved, yet No one is involved!"
Why was Jaanu worried about cutting a cake? Is this all related to something about Jaanu? Is there something in her medical condition? Lets see how it unfolds
Hey! Thanks for reading
Good at maintaining suspense is it
The story is few very episodes far from the Climax
Thanks for your love