Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Dec 8, 2016.
Thank you so much for sharing your thoughts here
That too from when a winner Very encouraging
Happy New Year Iniyaa..
Nice update.. Jaanu is trying to collate the events ..we have tried to guess whats happening next in your previous stories... but this time you have planned very well..not able to crack ..
Waiting for next episode.
Happy happy new year iniya..... Story Is going gr8 and am thoroughly enjoying. U r making us to come to edge of desk with an anxiety that what is .next?. Iam typing from my mobile and no access from.new office dear..... My stotra is also just hanging. ...
Aarthi... Pls move forward yaar, waiting for your next episode.
Thank you so much for your feedback
Very Happy that you are enjoying!!!
Posting the next episode now.
Thanks Aarthi dear
Too happy that you are enjoying dear
Oh yeah! even am not comfortable with phone
Try to continue your story as well dear!
Guess many are waiting for you including @leenarajaryan
“Seems her friend….that guy…..is in love with me….he wants to marry me…..” - Lekha said calmly.
“Wow” – Sandhya exclaimed and Rathna winked
“What you replied?” – Rathna asked seriously
“I said am not interested. She argued that the guy can come and talk with my parents directly….I said a firm 'No' and came” – Lekha finished
"so....Thats why they both have been watching us....They were waiting to propose...." - Sandhya laughed.
So he might be the one who could have called me by name the other day - Lekha calmed herself.
“The guy seems to be very decent and handsome as well” – Sandhya started.
“Yeah! He must be working in a good firm as well. What made you say No Lekha….Just to know….. am asking this. Moreover you have already told us that your parents won’t oppose love marriage.” – Rathna
“Just because my parents will agree, it doesn’t mean that I should go for a love marriage. I have already decided…I really want my parents to choose a guy with whom I will be spending my entire life. They very well know what kind of guy should I live with…They know better than me…” – Lekha replied as they walked
Sandhya and Rathna kept looking at her. The firmness in her talk was quite attractive.
Soon they reached office. Jaanu was already sitting and thinking about Chaaru.
“Good morning Jaan! Any progress in Chaaru’s matter?” – Rathna
“Told na….I got call from an unknown number and Chaaru spoke. After that nothing…” – Jaanu
“Informed her parents na?” – Rathna
“I went to her house at once. But her parents had gone to the temple. I even gave my number and came. But there was no response. The family is shattered Rathna….Imagine…how it will be for them if they lose their dear daughter….” – Jaanu
“Yeah…You said she has a brother right?” – Rathna
“Yes. He and Chaaru had lots of conflicts because of Chaaru’s love. But everything was fine later.” – Jaanu replied.
“Am planning to go to her home today. Have to make sure that my mom does not know about this.” – Jaanu continued
“We have lots and lots of work here Jaan! I think we have to extend our working hours today” – Rathna warned.
“hmmmmm” – Jaanu was struck.
Sandhya was walking towards her desk and Zaheer came in front of her all of a sudden.
Sandhya's hands were shivering out of nervousness fearing he might create some scene.
“I want to reveal that am in love with you. That’s why I disclosed yesterday.”
“Why dnt you reply anything?” - Zaheer.
“Zaheer……” – Sandhya stammered
“I understood why you dnt reply. No need to reply….” Saying this he walked away and Sandhya stood as such until the HR manager’s voice was heard.
“Guys! This is the new batch.” Saying this he introduced few guys and girls.
There was a formal introduction and everyone dispersed after that.
Sandhya came running to Rathna’s place and said.
“Rathnaa!!! A new girl in our team. She is Divya…."
Next moment, the girl came there.
“Hi! Am Divya….” She gave her hands to Rathna and she reciprocated.
“I have some work. We all will meet in break” saying this Sandhya left and Divya followed her since she needs to get trained.
It was break and Divya joined the gang.
She said everything about her on the very first day. In fact her personal matters.
“You know? Am committed. For the past 4 years” she said proudly and everyone were seeing each other’s face.
Slowly Divya joined the gang and started having fun with the other girls. They shared everything about their lives, personal things, and much more.
It was Jaanu’s birthday .
She came to office in a pure white salwar and a small white flower pinned to her curly hair.
“Happy birthday Darling…..” the girls shouted once she entered and hugged her tight.
Jaanu hugged them back.
It was evening break and the girls have personally invited everyone else for the surprise cake cutting and everyone were ready.
Everything was ready and everyone got gathered in the food court.
Sandhya closed Jaanu’s eyes and brought her to food court in order to surprise her.
At once she opened her eyes, she could see everyone gathered for her and a colourful cake has been placed in front of them. Rathna and Lekha were standing proudly beside that cake waiting for Jaanu.
The moment Jaanu saw the cake, a fear glued in her face. Her heart started beating fast. She got scared and nervous.
But she cut the cake as everyone were looking at her and she dnt want to create any scene in front of anyone.
Once the cake cutting was over, the girls gifted her a beautiful Crimson Red Kurthi as she likes red clor.
Though Jaanu was happy getting it, her thoughts scared her about the Cake Cutting….
“Oh God!!! Why did they cut the cake….” She murmured to herself in fear and reached her desk.
She logs in to her social networking account and there was a picture displayed saying it as a "memory".
It was her birthday celebration. Chaaru made Jaanu to celebrate in a very grand manner. It was fun, fun and mere fun… How sweet she was….Jaanu was seeing their happy faces in that photo…
Even last year, in spite of her busy schedule in office, she came home, wished me personally and gifted me a pretty earring. Chaaru even took her brother to Jaanu's birthday celebration in a coffee shop. Jaanu kept staring at Chaaru's brother and her thoughts wandered from A to Z!!!
Jaanu was seeing that picture and her landline rang.
“yeah am coming…”
Jaanu walked towards the reception and there was a delivery man standing in the reception.
“Miss. Jaanvi?” – he asked
“A courier for you…” – He handed her the courier and left
Jaanu got the courier and walked towards her desk trying to find from whom it was.
She took the parcel to her desk and tried to read the From address which was not very clear.
She opened it and that was a ceramic piece. Two girls sitting together with their hands clutched to each other. There was a piece of paper and Jaanu could see something has been written on that.
“To my best friend…Happy birthday Jan!”
“From my best friend? Is it Chaaru?” Has she sent this from somewhere? She is the only one who addresses me as "Jan". Moreover I dont have very close friends who can address me as their best friend.
People call her Jaanu, Jaan....But no one calls her "Jan" except Chaaru.
Jaanu at once informed the other girls and everyone analysed everything about the courier cover.
"Hey its from Andhra!!!" - Lekha exclaimed.
The others checked the cover but couldnt figure out any useful information other than its from Andhra!
Everyone were confused! "The confusion increases day by day!" - Sandhya said.
Kidnapped Or she is living under cover for some reason? - Jaanu
"Hey Keep quiet! Zaheer is passing by...." - Rathna calmed Jaanu.
Jaanu again read those words quietly “To my best friend…Happy birthday Jan!”
Again a wonderful episode iniya dear. I am travelling in auto and just came to edge of my seat reading this. You make us have a lot of thinking abt what's going to be next.... vareh vareh . Superb
Lovely episode. New year has started with many interesting twists..
I feel charu's brother is behind her disappearance. But Iniya will give unexpected surprise so still thinking..In ur last story love marriage & arranged marriage, till the end I never realised Keshav and Mathew would be same person. And it was a pleasant shock.
Ha Ha Ha!!! Sweet feedback!!!
happy that it was a pleasant shock
Story is nearing Climax and soon we will know whether your guesses are right or not dear
Happy that you are enjoying the story.
Am travelling to India soon and little busy. So I personally dont have satisfaction with this story.
Will try my best. Else will give my best in my next story
Thanks for your love
Happy reading your feedback dear