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The Night And The Stars - A Journey Towards The Dark

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by IniyaaSri, Dec 8, 2016.

  1. anupama1

    anupama1 Platinum IL'ite

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    Some one is observing Jaanu..... another couple is observing the girls. Those being observed are unaware of this so suspence is building up.:thumbsup:
     
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    meepre Gold IL'ite

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    What is happening?? Who is following them? Did Jaanu start from house and got into trouble??? Can't guess Iniyaa, you don't give us any clue so bad yaar :). Good narration dear.
     
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  3. IniyaaSri

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    Thanks for the feedback dear!!!:blush:
    And yeah even one more couple is observing the girls....:rolleye:
    Lets see what happens to these girls and whether Chaaru is traceable or not:thinking:
    Thanks once again dear:blush:
     
  4. IniyaaSri

    IniyaaSri IL Hall of Fame

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    Iniyaa is bad :tonguewink::tonguewink::biggrin: lol :grin:
    Thanks for sharing your thoughts dear:blush::blush::blush:
    That Keeps me motivated always :blush::blush:
     
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    Jaanu is kidnapped tooooooooooooooooooo ..
    :tonguewink::tonguewink::tonguewink::tonguewink:
    --PS
     
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  6. IniyaaSri

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    Is it :tonguewink::tonguewink::tonguewink:
    Ll post the next episode in few hours! :grinning:
     
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    Episode 21:

    Time was 11.25 and finally Jaanu reached.

    All three bursted into laughter seeing her.

    Her short curly hair was wet, dripping tiny drops of water.

    The hair has just started to get dried but seems Jaanu dnt give its time.

    The hair strands were trying to fly in all possible directions and Jaanu came running pacifying all those angry hair strands

    “Hey what is this!!!” – Sandhya as usual laughed heavily and everyone turned and looked at her.

    “Jaanu’s style” saying this Jaanu came running with a laugh.

    Rathna and Lekha were trying to laugh low.

    “Even if we miss the first few minutes of the movie, I am fine. But I really want to know what you have been doing from morning that you have reached this late” – Sandhya

    “I woke up at late!” – Jaanu smiled

    “Even I woke up late. I woke up around 9” – Sandhya laughed

    “I woke up at 8. But I dnt have time time to bath” – Jaanu said seriously

    “Dnt have time to bath?!!! How long you bath?” – Rathna wondered

    “Just three hours… That too head bath na…that’s why” – Jaanu replied seriously

    Jaanu pulled their hands into the movie theater as the girls stood as such listening to those 3 words “Just 3 hours

    Jaanu smiled secretly thinking about what will be the consequence for what she has done stealthily.

    “I have maintained the secret till now. Wow! Its really exciting to imagine about their reactions to my secret plan” Jaanu thought.

    She just tried to make a prank without knowing that there are ample tragedies getting ready for herself…

    Good that the theater lights were not turned off and the movie was yet to get started.

    The girls searched their seats and sat accordingly. Sandhya was already holding a small popcorn basket, a piece of black forest and finger chips. Everyone were excited to watch the movie. They were eagerly anticipating for the movie name to be displayed so that they can clap or shout.

    To their surprise, surprise? I should say shock…. To their shock, the movie name displayed “The Conjuring”

    The three girls were confused to see that title and thought they have come to the wrong screen or something.

    “Hey what is this?!!” – Lekha raised her voice softly

    Before Rathna and Sandhya attacked Jaanu with further more questions, Jaanu gave an evil laugh and everyone understood what has happened.

    She has stealthy booked tickets for this movie.

    “Idiot!!! Why did you do like this?” – Sandhya pinched her hard.

    “Stupid” – Rathna gave a knock on her head.

    Jaanu was laughing and laughing seeing their faces in that dim light.

    She was actually enjoying the fun.

    “Fine lets watch” – Sandhya started eating her popcorn and Rathna joined her with the black forest.

    Lekha was as quiet as a mouse since she was always afraid of such movies.

    She thought she will close her eyes for the entire movie so that she can somehow manage.

    “Miss Lekhaaaaa what you are doing my darling….” – Jaanu tried to whisper

    “Nothing. Just watching..” – Lekha said in a low voice.

    “I see…But only if you open your eyes, you can watch the movie my dear…” – Rathna pinched her hip.

    Sandhya was laughing seeing all the fun

    “Idiotic Jaanu! You know na am afraid of all these. Why did you book for this now? How will I sleep tonight” – Lekha reacted sadly

    All others laughed heavily seeing Lekha’s pathetic condition.

    Lekha tried to close her eyes every now and then and all of a sudden she heard the entire theater clapping. She opened the eyes and closed again.

    Often she heard the clapping sound. She dnt bother to watch what scene was that. All that she worried was about how she is going to have sleep that night.

    Finally, the movie got over and she was almost in a stage to cry.

    Jaanu laughed hard seeing that and others joined her too. Though Lekha dnt take it as offensive, she beat her hard.

    The day was full of fun, food and happiness and all started home. It was evening 5 and Sandhya got down from the bus and started walking towards a big road. The round was shady and cool. A tall guy with specs was standing beside his two wheeler.

    “Sorry sorry! Couldn’t make it fast!” – Sandhya went running.

    “That’s okay.” – Ram threw a charismatic smile at her

    “Looking pretty!” – he said

    Sandhya smiled at him.

    “This is for you and this is for your brother” – he gave her two carry bags

    “Wow” Sandhya jumped slightly and opened her carry bag at once.

    “Hey new dress!!!” her face brightened

    “Yeah. Its very long that you bought a new dress for yourself” – Ram

    “Hmmmm” – she gave a meaningful smile at him

    "I have bought something for you" - Sandhya said as she saw him.

    "What my darling has bought for me" - Ram kept seeing her

    Sandhya took two ice cream cones and handed one to Ram.

    Both started eating standing on the road and all of a sudden Ram's shirt got stained by the ice cream...

    "Oops!!! Wash it" - Sandhya took her water bottle and gave to him...

    "Thanks" - Ram kept his phone on his two wheeler and went aside to wash the stains...

    Sandhya kept seeing him and all of a sudden Ram's phone blinked "Chaaru calling......"

    Sandhya stood still seeing the name Chaaru....Her brain shut downed for a minute....She couldn't think anything else other than "Chaaru"

    Ram came back and took his phone and turned off the screen at once and parallely the call got cut...

    Sandhya stood as such without questioning him.

    After few minutes, his phone rang again and he cut the call once more....

    Sandhya decides to get clarified at once.

    "Why did you cut the call? - Sandhya

    "Hey! Its a old friend of mine. Not in touch much... She is an insurance agent and she keeps calling often..I am not interested. Thats why" - Ram said leaning on his two wheeler.

    "Oh...." - Sandhya did not know what all thoughts her brain is processing.

    "Her name is Chaaru...?" - Sandhya

    "Yeah....why?" - Ram stared at her

    Sandhya kept looking at him and before she could talk anything

    "Oh....oh my God....no no no...... not that Chaaru whom you use to talk about....Both are different...Am not a killer and all" - Ram said with a big laugh...

    Sandhya laughed back and after sometime both started to their homes...

    But her brain flashed with the same image "Chaaru calling..."
     
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    Iniyaa superb dear. what is happening more and more suspense?? Ram is innocent or not? You don't give us any clue to guess. Please dear open the mysteries soon.
     
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    Thanks for the feedback dear.
    Keep guessing ; )
    Will open the mysteries soon dear : )
     
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    Episode 22:

    Sandhya was walking and her phone rang.

    “Maa…..yeah am on the way. Will be there in 15 minutes” saying this she started walking fast as her mom is very strict.

    “Why are you late?” – Sandhya’s mom asked in a firm tone.

    “Sorry mom. Jaanu took us to shopping. So it took time. See this. She only bought for me.” Saying this she showed her the new dress which Ram bought for her.

    “Why is that girl spending like this?” – Sandhya’s mom asked as she gave her the tea cup.

    “She is like that maa. Leave her. Ok tell me whats the dinner tonight” Sandhya tried to divert the talks to escape from further more questions.

    “Am yet to decide” saying this she left

    Sandhya got relieved and she refreshed. She turned on the tv and her phone blinked with a text message. It was Zaheer

    “Uff…….Dont know how I am going to deal with him” Sandhya murmured

    She did not open the message and left it as such.

    The next day it was an usual day at office. Sandhya and Zaheer were made to work together for few hours.

    Sandhya did not have any casual talks with him. And both were focussed on their task. By noon, the task was completed and Sandhya slowly opened her personal inbox. She clicked a particular mail and clicked that image.

    “Zaheer! This is Ram. My college mate. We both are committed to each other” – Sandhya said without seeing Zaheer’s face.

    He has dumb struck by the sudden shock and he couldn’t talk further more. He felt like shouting in pain but his 6th sense said it was his office.

    He was quiet seeing that image.

    Sandhya trying hard to sound casual and asked “What Zaheer! You are my friend. Wont tell me how is my guy?”

    Zaheer did not know what to utter.

    “How is our pair” – Sandhya continued seriously in order to show him that she is already committed and she has no feeling for anyone else other than her Ram.

    Though Sandhya knew what thought Zaheer had on her, since there were no direct proposals, Sandhya tried to make the situation very casual.

    “Hey I need to meet the manager” saying this Zaheer swiftly walked out of the place and Sandhya gasped in relief.

    “Finally told him! He would have understood” thought Sandhya.

    She told everything to her friends and everyone were relieved that there wont be any more indirect proposals from Zaheer.

    “Hey everyone ready with your sarees?” – Rathna started

    “Yeah!” – Sandhya raised her hands in excitement

    “I will be wearing my sister’s saree tomorrow.” – Lekha said calmly

    “Even you are wearing right?” – Rathna looked at Jaanu

    “hmmmm…yeee….yesss” – Jaanu replied and all started their discussion about their accessories and saree colors

    “Mine is a plain orange chiffon saree with a raw silk blouse” – Rathna said eagerly

    “My sister’s is heavy embroidery one. Purple color” – Lekha added

    “Your’s Sandhya?” – Rathna

    “A green cotton saree which Ram gifted for my last birthday” – Sandhya

    “Nice. The cotton mania girl” – Rathna laughed and Sandhya joined her.

    “Nice. Hey what about you Jaanu?”- Sandhya asked

    “Am yet to decide which one to wear. Will go home and tell you” – Jaanu

    “By the way its time! Lets start” – Jaanu started walking quietly.

    But everyone started fixing locations to click nice pictures for their profile photos.

    Jaanu sat in her desk and her phone rang.

    It was an unknown number and she attended the call.

    “Hello….Hello…” – the voice on the other side

    “Hello…..” – Jaanu

    “Can you hear me? Chaaru here….” – The voice amplified

    Jaaanu got nervous hearing the name Chaaru….

    “Hey…..Chaarru.,….Where are you….what happened to you….” – Jaanu gasped heavily
     
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