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The Last Time!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jskls, Jan 29, 2019.

  1. iyerviji

    iyerviji IL Hall of Fame

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    Awesome poem which we all have to go through. In our family many are waiting for the last time. Some have seen everything and more than 80 yrs waiting for the call. But now a days God is taking away the young more than the old.

    I am also waiting for the last time before there is any serious health problem. But don't want my husband to see my last time better if I see his last time. Praying God he should live fir a long time without health problems
     
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  2. periamma

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    @jskls Lakshmi emotion filled poem.A new era starts with the ending of an old era.A new relationship arises when an old relationship fades.you see your parents in your children and so no last time.Process continues in another form.CHEER UP
     
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    One never knows!! Written so beautifully.
     
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  4. jskls

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    Thanks @Gauri03 for the appreciation. Yes as you say need to be grateful for all those beautiful first time and wonderful moments in between.
     
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  5. jskls

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    Thank you @iyerviji maa. As long as we have a fulfilling present we need not worry about the last time.
     
  6. jskls

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    Thanks @periamma. That's another intelligent way of looking at life. Thanks for the comforting words
     
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    True @SayHi no body knows. Thanks for the appreciation
     
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  8. Amica

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    With every goodbye, we lose a little bit of ourselves.
     
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    So True Amica.

    Nice to have you back here.
     
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