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The Closure

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Dec 22, 2017.

  1. sangeethakripa

    sangeethakripa Gold IL'ite

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    Is it so ?.. Do you really think that as "little bit...."?
     
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    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    I agree. For sure it is not little bit.
     
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    Justice served..But could have happened before sheila entered his life
     
  4. Adharv

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    Very well narrated BB ma'am......And fair punishment too!! Certain sins can never be forgiven. :beer-toast1:
     
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    I am ignoring the acid throwing part, as it's too extreme. Only a few hardcore criminals can do that. Now, as far as EMA is concerned, if you guys begin to award death sentences at this rate, I bet half of the men population will perish.
     
  6. sangeethakripa

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    Why did you ignore? Penalisation is for the overall act.
     
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  7. Tamrakshar

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    As I said, the way the character of Rahul has been depicted in the story, his throwing acid is extreme vilification. It looked like an afterthought.
     
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    To what extent people can commit sins .. eventhough they get some punishment later in their life that is always after the fact and the damage already happens by then .. :(

    --PS
     

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