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The 3 magical words (a short humorous story)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by vidya2606, Jun 10, 2014.

  1. vidya2606

    vidya2606 Silver IL'ite

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    Rohan checked his reflection in the mirror, clean shaven he was a dapper tonight, he smiled. His thoughts were interrupted by the sales lady, "Sir, your item is ready, it will be 25000/. Would you be paying by cash or card?" "Card", he said. He collected his packet and got into his car, waiting at the signal, he glided his hand on the velvet case. "She is gonna love it", he said it aloud in the privacy of his sedan.

    He was dying to be in her arms tonight, and hear those magical words. He laughed, for thinking like a teenager. Nisha's intercom beeped, the guard informed her of Rohan's arrival. she checked herself for one last time in the mirror, sprayed her chanel, and went to the door.

    Rohan walked in with a bunch of flowers, and gave her the velvet box. A beautiful diamond studded pendant with a gold chain. She blushed, as he offered to string it around her neck, his hand brushed her bare shoulders, she shivered. She looked in his eyes, as he caressed her long hair, her porcelain skin, she wrapped him in his arms and finally, the moment that he was waiting for, she gently whispered the magical words, "Not tonight darling".
     
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  2. god2014

    god2014 Gold IL'ite

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    Nice one told in very best possible way
     
  3. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Poor guy what a disappointment:)

    It was short and sweet story.
     
  4. loveangel

    loveangel New IL'ite

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    Poor guy!! rofl laugh1smiley
     
  5. ChillySnow

    ChillySnow New IL'ite

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    I thought those 3 magical words as "I LOVE YOU"..
     
  6. curiousgals78

    curiousgals78 Gold IL'ite

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    Amusing story. short and nice
     
  7. Sparkle19

    Sparkle19 Silver IL'ite

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    Short and sweet..
    Very nice..
     

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