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  1. sindmani

    sindmani Platinum IL'ite

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    The next day , as planned the 6 of them left to the hotel .Both the sets went in different cabs. Radha first congratuled Anand , followed by Kala and Deepika. They all entered the hotel . They ordered North Indian dishes . everything was going well. Radha wanted to see Anand's fiancee. Anand showed the girls Kalyani's photo. They all liked her . Radha exclaimed that they were made for each other. Anup was about to tell something when the phone ringed . Anup went out to attend the call. After the lunch the guys wanted to go to marina Beach as it was near by. The girls too wanted to come . they all set to go. Marina was such a fun. They had great time. They stood in the shores. Now the guys wanted to have a separate Bachelor's party. So it was decided that the guys will stay Bach in the hotel room itself. Now the girls got ready to leave . kala had an idea that they too can stay back. Radha was hesitant as Parvathi will have to stay alone this night.
     
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    Kala was adamant, so the girls too decided to stay. They all went to the hotel. Radha called parvathi to tell her they will arrive tomorrow in the evening only. The booked two rooms for the two teams.The three girls were talking . suddenly an idea that will Change Radha's fate came to her. Radha called the other girls to see how the people who consume alcohol talk. The other girls stayed away saying that it's not a great idea. But Radha was really excited and she went to the guys room . They were in the alcoholic state. But they could talk. Radha had a chat with them. Anand was in a state were he really wanted to stop the marriage and he wanted to marry a girl like Radha. He had a bad ferocious idea in his mind. He didn't tell his friends . He asked the waiter to get Radha softdrinks. He remembered Anup was a drug addict. He remembered he has brought it here. So he added the drug to the softdrinks( secretly) and gave Radha. Radha believed Anand a lot. Radha could not control her sleep. She slept in their room itself .Anand waited for Anup and Diwakar to sleep. Later in the morning Diwakar got up to find that she was raped.He tried to wake up Radha who was still in unconscious state. Anup and Anand was called. Anup asked who was it as it should be one among the three. The door is closed from outside. All of them denied, he gave the idea to flee. The fled away from the scene.Anand's conscience killed him.


    Let us see what happens
     
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    Radha got back her consciousness. She was shocked . At the same time Deepika and Kala came, they understood the fact. They were really angry on the guys. They all at once went to the reception to ask about the guys. They told they had already gone..
    They were shocked. Now they scolded Radha for going there in an untime. They need to find the culprit. Who was it among the three.
    Now in the room Anand confessed to Anup and Diwakar. He was scared about tge consequences.They scolded him a lot. They asked him to marry Radha in the following day. Anand was scared about his parents response in marrying Radha.
    Radha , Deepika and Kala came home to find Parvathi eating breakfast. Parvathi was stocked on the following news. Parvathi slapped Radha for going to their room when they were drunk.Radha wanted to know who was it. She called the girls to go to their home to ask the culprit as to why he did such an act.
     
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    The girls denied saying they were scared. Radha went alone. Parvathi asked if she was going to marry the rapist. She answered " how can I marry 3 members" and laughed hysterically. The girls were really worried.
    Radha went there. Diwakar told Radha everything and how much he love her. Anand literally was going mad. Diwakar told Radha that she has to marry Anand . so what was or would be Radha's decision.


    The final decision readers please give before I complete this serial. should Radha marry Anand or not
     
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    No she shud do a police complaint & get Anand behind the bars.
     
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    My feelings are same as yours leena madam. But i feel Radha could have avoided going to a room of guys whe n they are drunk. I know she believed them a lot especially Anand was her friend. Prevention is better than cure.
     
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    Radha could be a bold girl but there are certain limits to be followed. No matter how close a girl can be with a guy, she should stay within boundaries especially when the guy is drunk and it being untime. She was also responsible for giving him the opportunity. What she had to go through was the consequence of her mistake. The biggest punishment she got for it.
    Anand is of more fault than Radha. He was not in a very drunk state as he was able to decide an idea and execute it. He knew how much she trusted him. This is pure and pure cheating from his side.
    He does not deserve to be married to her. The society is so conservative, as they think getting the rapist married to the victim is a good judgement. No the girl mentally is killed that moment. She was forced physically which is traumatic to her and to add to that is forced to marry and live with that animal (the guy who forces himself on a girl can never be a human) for rest of her life just to satisfy society. This is like punishing the victim. Radha should not marry Anand, he should be legally punished.
    Sorry for the long reply.
     
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    Meepre , u have voiced my thoughts too. Radha should have been in her limits. Her side , She never dreamt that she would be given drugs by her friend Anand itself. Anand is not a human at all.
     
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    Conclusion
    Radha denied to marry Anand. She told she was betrayed by him for thinking him as a friend. She was trashed. She was used without her knowledge. He is not a human but a cheap minded person who can see a woman as an object only . Anand didnt even look at her and was crying .
    She looked at Anand and told that she will get a better husband than him and went away. She never ever wanted to look at him again. She came home.She told the girls the happenings . They were happy flr her decision . pavathi asked her to marry Anand itself. Radha said she had no such feelings for Anand. Now she felt he is a cheat thats all. If he really loved het he should have atleast proposed her . His love was just a lust or physical desire. Next day was their exam. They were preparing for the exam
    she got a call from Anup . Anup was crying, Anand has met with the accident and he is admitted in the hospital in a serious condition. Radha was standing still like a statue. After the exam , the four girls went to the hospital .Anand's parents were crying , the doctor told Anand died. Anup and diwakar started crying.
     
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    Nice story Sindmani.. the ending is very good.. :thumbup::thumbup:
     
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