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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sindmani, Nov 1, 2016.

  1. sindmani

    sindmani Platinum IL'ite

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    Four MBA students reside in Chennai near their college. They are Radha , Deepika , kala and Parvathi. The house owner Mrs and Mr paramesh are too good and they are residing downstairs. 4 of them are a great team. Once they come back after the college , they have a great time with Mrs and Mr Paramesh. Out of all Parvathi is very soft natured. So all of them including the house owners like her a lot. Kala is quite talented in singing and a great singer in the college. Deepika studies well and is a topper in her class.Radha is a beautiful woman with a bold nature. They are all friends from their under graduation. They are great friends , so they all joined together for post graduation in the same college. They all hail from Thirunelveli. Their UG was also there.they are here for the post graduation since one month. They all miss their home town. Food is provided by Mrs paramesh. She will prepare lunch also and they have to pack it. Every thing went fine. But one day suddenly Deepika screamed in the night about 2 o clock. All the friends were bewildered. Deepika had a bad dream in which she saw as if she was being chased by a robber with a knife.
     
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    Hey, please continue. I love suspense.
     
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    Omg..more than Deepika rest all will be scared listening to her...but anything at midnight is breathtaking... Good going ..please post soon...
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    Sindmani waiting for next part.Tirunelveli girl frightened for knife?oh no
     
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    Too small start... Babre... you make us come to edge of our seat.... Pls post next episodes soon,,,
     
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    Part 2
    Other girls cooled her down, gave her water and all went to sleep. Next day in a the college, the girls were talking. As usual the topic went to fashions, cinema. Suddenly Deepika was asked about her dream last day. She told that a man with an animal mask was following her when she was returning from somewhere in an auto. So they asked her if she saw any suspense movie or read any news of robbery. She said no. But Deepika told that her friend in her native named Latha was robbed her gold chain the last week. This would have made her dream like this as such incidents get in to her spine and is stored permanently in her subconscious mind for Deepika is a scary cat. Other girls called her scary cat which boosted her ego and told that she is not that scary type. She can even hold snakes. The other girls laughed aloud. Radha replied " you can hold snacks not snakes" . Deepika made a bet that she will show her bravery one day. Days went on. In a week their semester is to start. They were having study holiday. Mrs Paramesh came running home that day. The girls were studying in a group by making fun of each other. It seems the next house of Mr Vinod was burgled and 10 sovereign of gold was stolen. Mrd an Mr Vinod were not at home. They Came just now. Police came for investigation. It seems they will find the thief soon. The girls were a bit scared as they are living away from their parents.
     
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    Part 3
    The other day girls were busy talking with Mrs Paramesh when Radha was called by her friend Ganesh who is senior to her.It seems his engagement is fixed . The bride is his parents' choice. So he is providing feast for all his friends in a 3 star hotel. all the four girls were called.Anand actually had some soft corner and feelings for Radha. But he was hesitant as she might wrong him if he proposed her and now its too late.Anand had 2 friends, Diwakar and Anup. They are jovial types with liquor habit and smoking habit. Yes men are men. Diwakar and Anup used to make fun of Radha and Anand' s friend ship quoting it as love. Even if Anand says radha is not such a type, they call him mad. They will ask then why is Radha talking with you more than us. Even Anand wanted to marry her and liked them making fun of them. But his parent have chosen a bride now. He secretly wished that some magic happens and the engagement stops. But he knew that it will definitely take place.Parvathi was not willing to go the place for treat.Parvathi is a forward thinking person but her parents will not entertain her going to a hotel along with boys even if they are her friends and decent. Radha told her thatshe will ask her parents' permission. But Parvathi did not entertsin. She hated the guy Anup as she feels he looks at girls in an odd way. She did day this to the other girls many times but they would not listen stating that he is jovial with girls.Radha informed her parents .They were happy for Anand.Radha has told about Anand. Kala told her parents that only girls were going. This made Radha feel bad. She enquied about why she lied her parents.Kala told that her parents are not that forward thinking and if she tells the truth they will not allow her. Deepika told her parents , they asked her about the place where she is going. They advised her to be careful as men are also coming.
     
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    This story is inspired from different dramas and movies on women empowerment and this is a story which will educate us to know how the crime against women can be avoided
     
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    Part 4
    The 3 girls were talking in the night and playing cards. Radha enqired parvathi for why her parents are too strict for not a big thing in life. They all know the three guys to be their seniors and they are good people .it is just a lunch in hotel that's all. It is not even staying in the resort. Even staying in different rooms in the resort is a great idea.But they have exams or else they can stay and go for sight seeing to the area near by. Parvathi told that her parents are a bit old fashioned that's all. Her fiancée Mr Jagdeesh ( her cousin got engaged a year back)will not entertain her talking to male friends. Radha told that though Jagdeesh is a software in Chennai and usually meets Parvathi and sometimes all of them , his thinking pattern has to be elevated.Deepika told " Now Jagdeesh talks with all of us , so are you taking it wrong , he has to do the same" . Kala said then don't inform any of them about this lunch. Parvathi did not answer all the questions. She told she doesn't want to hide or lie any of them. Psrvathi was such a will powered woman. Yes she was highly respected in her class for her honest nature. Yes she wanted to go along with her Friends. Even the 3 guys like her a lot. Anup a person who is a great flirt calls Parvathi sister. Anand helped her in her final year project. The 3 guys helped all the four of them in paper presentations . they have given them important reference books too. But parvathi hated to hide facts from her parents and fiancee.
    Anand could not sleep. He told that he was scared of his engagement. Diwakar asked him the reason. Anup told " you have no option." Anand told that his fiancee Kalyani is his neighbor in his home town which is a small town. She used to call him Anna until she was 10 or 12. She is a B.com discontinued whereas he is an MBA graduate and working as a manager in an esteemed MNC. So he wanted a woman who has independent thinking , who can talk in various topics from politics to cinema, from current affairs to historical facts. He needs a person who can read Shakespeare' s plays at least the abridged one, RK . Narayan stories , Sherlock Holmes to Rabindranath Tagore stories. He feels Kalyani cannot be his life partner, she is not his intellectual companion.Kalyani wears only sarees in this 21 St century otherwise a plain chidithar with double side dupatta. He needs a wife who wears jeans and tops or at least Kurtis. He doesn't want an ultra modern wife with shorts. Anup told an idea which made Diwakar and Anand shocked. Anup asked Anand to marry Radha tomorrow as a registered marriage and go to his home town along with Radha as his wife.
    The ways of men and their talking can create havoc in a girl' s life.little did he think about Radha's feelings. Radha believes them to the core, she is only their friend.Radha has no such feeling for Anand.she is a jovial type . she likes Anand as they have same taste. Radha likes RK. Narayan stories, Sherlock Holmes, Shakespeare plays. She has lots of knowledge from history to current affairs. She is a sportive woman. But fate has something in store for her tomorrow
     
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    On more thing , I am only writing about these men in the story. There are lots of males whom I respect. Not all men are wrong.there are lots of men who are great gentlemen. Here also I will be writing about positive qualities of these guys .kindly give me suggestions to improve my writing skills.
     

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