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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jan 19, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    That was a starless night.
    The climate was stuffy too.
    BUt I had the moon beside,
    Dressed in a denser blue.

    While she spoke and laughed,
    Tiny bells clang inside me.
    And the sound was too soft,
    Yet succeeded in moving me.

    To her, it might have been a time-pass.
    To me, my time seemed to pause.
    I wished it to prolong forever.
    I still am not able to cover,

    My misty eyes and dreamy state,
    Though I come out of it quick.
    None other thing is so great
    In this man that you may like.

    Now the sky is full of stars
    And seen also is the moon.
    A gentle breeze tears me bare
    But I feel so empty too.

    One day, my joy will return
    Oh! I am so sure of it!
    I don't brood now, but in turn
    Work hard to deserve it.
     
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    RGS,
    Loved it.. Loved it... :clap

    beautiful lines you have written.. and bringing me some happy thoughts & memories... :)

     
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    Thanks a lot Pallavi4Me, for such an appreciative feedback. It made me a bit moved, you know? -rgs
     
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    [​IMG] Wonderful poem Rgs.
    Loved it a lot.

    Regards,
    Latha.
     
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    Thanks a lot Latha, for your appreciation. I liked the cute smiley too. -rgs
     
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