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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Feb 16, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Cursing the moon and kicking the floor,
    I was waiting for you my dear,
    Saying to myself that I don't adore
    This odd quality of yours, ever.

    You came very late and smiled at me.
    The anger vanished from me.
    Clasping my hands, you looked at me.
    Something moved in me.

    Why is it that I always see
    A little girl in you?
    How are you able to console me,
    Like a mom who knew?

    Questions galore and I don't know
    How to answer them all.
    I don't have to, dear, for now
    I still await your call.
     
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  2. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Pari85, for adding this to your likes. -rgs
     
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    Loved the lines RGS... For some questions.. no answers.. and you dont need any answer about someone .. we just need follow our heart...
     
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    Good one RGS!!
    Wish,It shud continue after wedding too :)
     
  5. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks Pallavi4Me, for your nice feedback. Glad to get such a feedback anyday. -rgs
     
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    Thats a very tough call. Isn't it Nihasvin?
    Lets see how far it goes! :)

    Thanks for your feedback. -rgs
     
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    You came very late and smiled at me.
    The anger vanished from me.
    Clasping my hands, you looked at me.
    Something moved in me.

    Why is it that I always see
    A little girl in you?
    How are you able to console me,
    Like a mom who knew?

    AWESOME LINE
    SUPERB")
     
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    Thanks a lot GaneshKiran, for your appreciation. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     

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