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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by BhumiBabe, Nov 30, 2018.

  1. BhumiBabe

    BhumiBabe Platinum IL'ite

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    Space

    All I ask from you
    Is the space to heal
    The space to think
    So I can control how I feel
    But each time you try
    To force through my wall
    Worm your way in
    Trying to take my all
    All for a little space
    You leave me raising my voice
    Too frustrated to seem sane
    Taking away my only choice
    Try to understand
    We're worlds and miles apart
    And I need time and space
    To clean the slate and restart
     
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  2. Lalithambigai

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    Reading this beautiful poem reminded me of a saying I read somewhere that goes like this, "If an egg is broken by an outside force, life ends. If broken by an inside force, life begins. Great things always begin from the inside."
     
  3. GeetaKashyap

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    @BhumiBabe,

    A good plea.
    I wish we could send such pleas to a few people in our lives and get them to understand and respect our needs.

    I wish we had some kind of imaginary cocoons where we could get in to hibernate n rejuvenate leaving disturbing thoughts and people behind.

    I wish...uff! I wish..
     
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    That's a really nice saying. I've never heard it before. I like it a lot
     
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    It's so frustrating to always be present, now that we're adults. Somehow, people always view personal space as something weird and dangerous.
     

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