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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by blackbeauty84, Sep 15, 2017.

  1. blackbeauty84

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    Thank you Kcb
     
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    unexpected twist. nice to read.
     
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    Thanks Usha
     
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    Thank you Rakhii. How are your kids? What is your son upto?
     
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    Short and nice story, you cannot trust anyone now a days.
     
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    All good hun. cant complain; the usual. you?
     
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    Hi BB,

    Nice story. I thought she would be a cop came to invest about robbery. Didn't expect the twist. Good one BB.
     
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    @BB

    Liked the surprising twist! :clap2:
     
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    Hi @blackbeauty84

    Short, neat and a crisp thriller that was.... enjoyed reading
     

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