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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Feb 2, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Asking your hand is not easy.
    I practised it hard you know?
    And felt all the more queasy
    For, what if I hear a "No!"?

    Without you I am nothing!
    With you, there is nothing
    That is beyond my reach.
    Remember this dear. Please!

    "Fine! I am something to you.
    But what can you do to me?"
    Ask me now and I'll show you
    A few who will talk about me.

    For, talking about myself,
    That too, to you, my dear,
    Is something big by itself,
    That I won't even try dear!
     
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  2. vjbunny

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    Dear Rgs...
    Such a lovely ode ...
     
  3. Pallavi4me

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    wow... wow.. what a feel RGS...

    Lovely to read
     
  4. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks VJBunny, for your first feedback. So happy to receive a feedback from you. -rgs
     
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    Thanks a lot Pallavi4Me, for your appreciation. -rgs
     
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    Very Beautiful poem!!
     
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    this tells all behind the entire feel! Nice one RGS

    :)
     
  8. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks a lot Strangerrr. Happy to receive your feedback here too. -rgs
     
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    Thanks Nihasvin, for your appreciation. -rgs
     

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