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She Walked Down The Aisle!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by AhujaGirl, Jun 20, 2017.

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  1. Jun 20, 2017 #11
    Adharv

    Adharv Gold IL'ite

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    Superb narration ma'am, sply your command on the lang was cool. Great Job!! short and cute story. :banana::clap2::clap2:

    Was it father & daughter bonding??? That is how I felt..correct me if I am wrong.

    Keep writing...Looking forward for more of your stories...You can try out for novel as well. May be this story also can be continued further :cheer::cheer: Goodluck.
     
    Adharv, Jun 20, 2017
    Adharv, Jun 20, 2017
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  2. Jun 21, 2017 #12
    AhujaGirl

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    Hi,

    Thank you so much for the feedback... It could be a father & daughter bond because every daughter makes her father rather proud and means his life to him.

    I'll definitely try to continue this one :)

    Cheers! :)
     
    AhujaGirl, Jun 21, 2017
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