Icreate this thread for purpose to improving the beginners writing skills in english. everyday i write a simple topic and any one interest, post your thoughts also. i am not a good to write as well as speak in english. anyone have a time please guide me as well as correct my sentence formation in that topic. I do myself only these days but i don't know my writing is right or wrong.no one help to me. In my environment all are engage with there work so i don't disturb them. so i choose this way is use and helpful to me not only me, also some persons look like me. I hopefully, i start this today onwards. kindly, suggest and help me .
Today topic is, IS PLAYING COMPUTER GAMES BETTER THAN WATCHING TV? My thought is, Yes, Playing computer games better than tv, because computer games is an entertainment only but it create thinking capability, planning, how to control ourselves. It provides lot of games available in computer and also easy to download it . People make a choice for which one is good and interest to play. It is good for everyone . It gives happy, energy to our health (play limited time) and relax our mind then start our routine work. Nowdays, television provides lot of serials and films but it’s concept are same but different dialogues and stories. Here advantages is to watching the NEWS and some channels only provide mind oriented program. Otherwise, people watch the television simply sit and also take the foods in front of the television. It is not good for our health. if there is no program, continually change the channel, it is also irritable or make a stress ourselves only.
Is competition necessary in the learning process? 1. In learning process, competition is essential one. 2. Learning is start from our child stage . 3. Nowdays, many persons concerned competition and others feel that competition is nothing worry about. 4. In this moderate world, competition is good for everyone. 5. It improves and develop our activities. 6. Everyone not born with competition desire. They learn it. 7. Everyperson nature is different from one. Nature in the sense, one is boldly to face the competition and another one is nervous to attend before two or more persons because of fear. 8. Anyone face the competition, the results is win or loss, whatever the result they gain a knowledge about that . 9. so, here competition is success or failure. In that place we learn/get about that skills. 10. Here lot of benefits like , i. they practice the skills, develop thinking capability and to know how to manage the circumstances. ii. It helps to encourage the growth and develop the capability and to become a familiar/popular person. iii. To know the rules and limitation about the completion. iv. To handle loss v. Keep a proper time management. vi. Set a goals and try to different roles. vii. Learn how to perform before a group. viii. To enhance the strength of knowledge like planning, co-operation, develop the ability and popularity. These are the benefits in the competition at learning process.
Hi Goodmorning twink, here i posted the today topic. i point out the 10 sentences if you have a time for correct it. and suggest me what are the ways to improve the writing skills without mistake.
Hi, any one have a time kindly say, what are the mistakes had done in my sentences.(Is competition necessary in the learning process?)
