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Secret Guilty Pleasures!

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by twinsmom, May 7, 2008.

  1. twinsmom

    twinsmom Silver IL'ite

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    She glanced quickly to see if anyone was watching her. She blushed and smiled at her own folly. Who would recognize her? May be it is Freudian paranoia, she justified herself. This feeling that you are always watched… This is no time for any psychological analysis… There was hardly any time to do that. She looked at the two young boys in front of her… Too young to be a part of her guilty secret life… She should be ashamed of herself… At her age, she was leading them astray… What would her husband say, when… no...no… IF… he came to know? He should NOT come to know… he WOULD NOT… she told herself fiercely. This was her life… If she wanted certain pleasures, she was entitled to them… But what if her mother- in- law came to know? Quickly she glanced around again… Was there any one who remotely looked like her mother- in- law’s friends…or even foes?

    ‘Don’t be stupid!’ she chided herself… ‘There is no one here who’ll recognize you.’ Just she and the two boys… Now they would not spill the beans afterwards would they? Alarmed by the possibility, she glanced at them… No… they looked as guilty as she felt… Probably they too knew what was at stake…

    She had picked them up and driven them to the railway station. There they had caught the 11.30 Mail and then they had taken an auto to this place… Now she hoped to make it to the 2.30 Passenger, so that she’d be home at least by 3.30. Mother in law had gone for a wedding at her daughter’s place.

    Any way, better hurry she thought. She looked at the waiter and said, ‘Three Mediterranean Subterfuge followed by three Chocolate Mocha Masquerade!’

    Hmmm! She and her kids just loved the names of these ice cream flavours as much as their delicious feel in their mouth! Her husband and his mother had forbidden them from eating ice creams… Not good for the kids’ tonsils… not good for you either…

    But she and her kids indulged in such guilty pleasures… once in a blue moon!
     
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  2. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

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    dear Twinsmom,

    Real Good One....... We also indulge in these kind of guilty trips and enjoy that. Maybe things done stealithily are more sweet...........ha ha
     
  3. Rohini Santhosh

    Rohini Santhosh New IL'ite

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    Dear TwinsMom,

    Great description of stealthy pleasure.........:clap:clap:clap

    Luv,
    Rohini
     
  4. ramyaganesh

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    A good one Twinsmom.. and very nicely written..

    regards,
    ramyaganesh
     
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    a good buildup i see in ur story...

    doing stealthy things alwys add up spice in our life

    :claps:
     
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    Paulina Moderator Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    Hi ! twinsmom,

    Superb narration, great build up of suspense and the last twist was simply wonderful.........really led us on there....enjoyed it immensely....could almost taste the flavour of the icecream as it glided down stealthily down the throats of those three guilty ones !!

    warm regards
    PAULINA:wave
     
  7. mjsaroj

    mjsaroj Senior IL'ite

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    Nice Story with suspense, It ends with as cool as ice cream
     
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    Good narration and suspense.. An I'm too one among you and love icecreams.. I had tonsils too and my mom will not get me those colorful icecreams. pleasnt memories..
     

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