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    Scorpio707

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    You swept me off my feet....
    To my eyes you were such a feast...
    Being in love with you was a treat...
    Life was in full swing and up beat...
    Together it was a feat...
    Blessed we felt and sweet...
    We walked a path thinking it's clean and neat...
    Single we were so incomplete...
    Together we totaled in our balance sheet...
    As far as I remember we were so discreet...
    Presuming we had cemented our feet in concrete...

    Wish to relive those moments all over again...
    How lovely were those days...Alas can I not
    Do a rewind and repeat ??
     
    Scorpio707, Nov 5, 2014
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  2. Nov 5, 2014 #2
    iyerviji

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    Good one Scorpio dear, you are rocking in Poems forum,glad I got the chance to give the first fb
     
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    Nice lines.. Scorpio .. first 4 lines the best ..
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Vijima, thanks so much...glad to hear from you...
     
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    Scorpio707

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    Hey ammulur...thank you...
     
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    jasmine25

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    Wonderful Scorpio.. Way to go:thumbsup
     
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    Thanks Jasmine...
     
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    very nice S7
    enaku oru unmai therijaganum neenga civil engineer ah...ella accountant ah.....?
     
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    Scorpio707

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    LOL...Rendime kediyadhe :)....y Uma ??
     
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    Good one Scorpio....
     
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