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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by Tamrakshar, Feb 9, 2018.

  1. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Silver IL'ite

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    Ira is handsome, Ira Is strong
    She's really cute and her hair is long
    Ira is handsome, Ira is strong
    So listen to her amazing Song.

    Oie oie oie oie oie oie yae
    I am Ira from fantasyland, you can be very frank
    Oie oie oie oie oie oie yae
    I am Tamrakshar and I love your every prank.

    Getting such favourable comments from you means a lot for me. Time permitting, I will try to impress you. CHEERS!
     
  2. Sandycandy

    Sandycandy Finest Post Winner

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    Tamrakshar,
    Yeh badi fantastic chaal chali
    Akhir woh aa gaya Teri gali
    Ab na likhna koi nibandh
    Warna Indus Lady Degi tujhe dand.

    Zyada mat socho !
     
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    Mistt Platinum IL'ite

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    :roflmao::lol:
    Sandy I like your sense of humor. I have been laughing like anything. Especially third line. ( ab na likhna koi nibandh. LOL )Thanks. I need stars to rate your post here . 5/5
     
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  4. Archanaanchan

    Archanaanchan IL Hall of Fame

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    @Sandycandy kya hai re tu ... Bang on !!
     
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  5. Iravati

    Iravati Platinum IL'ite

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    You don’t have to impress me. Just don’t let me down. I don’t wish to draw attention to myself especially in chatty and social corners. Don’t gush about and draw uncalled attention. I prefer a low profile online. I want to keep it that way. Compared to my real life, I want virtual to be relatively quiet and unknown. Hence, no claim to attention.

    You have a choice what you would be remembered for in IL, that guy whose threads turn silly and haywire or that guy who writes something substantial. A gutsy and responsible member always steers their thread in the right direction.

    You don’t know me and I don’t know you. If possible, just do me this favour. Keep your threads to the literary write up, as mentioned you have the command and vocabulary, put them to admirable use. And assist me by not putting me in a spot with camera and lights and action. I want to avoid social attention and glare onto this obscure and toned-down online profile. We can work out something? Can you do me that favour? Good luck.
     
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    Iravati Platinum IL'ite

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    Also: It’s a lot of hard work trying to keep a forum/club afloat with sensible and good stuff. Trust me. I know the pain and time Malathy, Jey and Admin and Mods invest in maintaining the forum. If you can assist in steering your threads to original content, and if I don’t (inadvertently) cause them more work, it will ease up the lives of everyone. Think.
     
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  7. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Silver IL'ite

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    "We can work out something? Can you do me that favour? Good luck."



    That's a done deal Iravati. I was aghast to see people discussing off-topic issues. They didn't directly name you, but I have a strong feeling that they were talking about you. It's not at all fair. You have every right to maintain a low online profile. I respect your choice.
     
  8. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Silver IL'ite

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    I understand, and I will try my best.
     
  9. Thyagarajan

    Thyagarajan Finest Post Winner

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    :hello:Hats-off to your super style of summing up and analysing as well. The whole read was akin to watching as a spectator sitting at the edge of the seat a winning sprinter bresting ribbon in Olympics.
    2. Thanks for mentioning me about review styles.
    Regards.
     
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    @Mistt @Archanaanchan
    Thank you !

    What just happened here ?
    Tam Tam seems in a bit of fear
    Suddenly taking a U turn
    I think he is feeling the burn
    Started the fire
    But can’t face the ire
    At others he now starts to scoff
    A man not standing by his words is such a put off !



     
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