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Revenge

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by PoojaShah, Oct 28, 2016.

  1. PoojaShah

    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    At the victim's heart he took an aim
    Then brutally his body he maimed
    Not caring he would have to do the time
    He committed a heinous crime
    Serene smile on his face
    Content with absolute disgrace
    He is standing in the court
    They say he's a sadist sort
    Only he knew how sweet the revenge felt
    After all he had played the cards he'd been dealt.
     
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  2. PavithraS

    PavithraS Platinum IL'ite

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    Nice poems dealing with soulful emotions, @PoojaShah ! Happy Diwali !
     
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  3. Rihana

    Rihana Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    A wealth of emotions, thoughts, and human actions described beautifully in a short poem. And the lines rhyme. Call me old-fashioned, but for the longest time, poems that didn't have a rhyme, felt like not-poem.

    Some rides are worth the fall.

    Good one, Pooja. I have to go and read your other writings.
     
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    PoojaShah Gold IL'ite

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    Thank you so much.
    Happy Diwali to you too. :)
     
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    Thank you so much... :)
    Please read my stories and poems.. Do not forget to give your valuable feedback.
    Thnx again.
     
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    Another nice one on Revenge. See you write rhythmically and it is beautiful! Keep writing!
     
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    Thank you so much. :)
     
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