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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by ratan, Jan 25, 2019.

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  1. Feb 16, 2019 #111
    GeetaKashyap

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    Well written, @ratan. Our society should be understanding and supportive like the characters in your story; a person going through a bad patch needs this minimal support to stabilize themselves.
     
    GeetaKashyap, Feb 16, 2019
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    periamma

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    @ratan Good story with a good moral.Shailaja character depicted well .Momentary pleasures do not bring happiness in life and you have said through Abhay's character.How Preeti escaped from punishment?she is also a partner in the crime.Ratan wish you to write more stories
     
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    ratan

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    Well said. Sometimes family members are not supportive because of society's fear. "Sabse bada rog - kya kahenge log". :facepalm:
    Your above lines are very applicable where a person is alone in the middle of mob.:thumbsup:
     
    ratan, Feb 16, 2019
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    ratan

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    Thanks periamma. Preeti 's guilty concious and whole life regret is a punishment in itself.

    These types of women are unforgivable who break two families.

    She save her family after breaking Shailja's.

    For her family we can say better late than never.

    Thanks for your wishes.:blush:
    Regards.
     
    ratan, Feb 16, 2019
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