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Rainbow( a collection of seven short stories )

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sushdevi, May 29, 2006.

  1. sushdevi

    sushdevi Senior IL'ite

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    Here are a collection of seven short stories by me ..
    pleaswe evaluate themand send me your esteemed comments .I would welcome all types of genuine comments ,with open arms ..
    so just splurge ..
    regards &love sushdevi(Sheela devi)


    please visit the following links to access The Rainbow(the collection of my short stories )

    www.shawnolson.net/a/1286/

    www.shawnolson.net/a/1287/.

    www.shawnolson.net/a/1288/.
     
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  2. sudhavnarasimhan

    sudhavnarasimhan Silver IL'ite

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    Well Done, Sheela!

    Hi Sheela,

    I found time to read a couple of stories...wanted to congratulate you first, so came back here.....
    The first story about the mother was very touching....could really emphatise with her. Butjust wanted to let you know that you have to do some more careful editing......otherwise the story line and the simple flowing way you have written is good. the second one on the chat- lovers was so sad....i thought sunanda would have been happy to meetthe Handsome Alok....oh no...poor guy, if he only had sent his original picture in the first place...
    Cute story and well thought theme and climax....
    You have talent, so keep writing. Will read the other stories soon and let u know!
    all the best...
     
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