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Poem from my hubby

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by meenaprakash, Nov 12, 2005.

  1. meenaprakash

    meenaprakash Silver IL'ite

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    poem fm my hubby

    Hello ladies,

    Looks like its a season of poems........

    I'm not good at it but I would like to share a small poem that my husband wrote to me during our dating period - years ago.

    I'd preserved it along with the rose that he had given me.

    Here it goes..........

    M - Mesmerising, Your Eyes - Clear, Beautiful & Pure
    E - Everlasting Your Embrace - Secure & Warm to Lure
    E - Empowering Your Love - To All My Ailments a Cure
    N - Nihilistic My Existence - Without You Being For Sure
    A - Awash with your closeness - I Beg God Now to Prolong My Tenure
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    meenaprakash Silver IL'ite

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    Another poem - hope its not too much

    Hello Ladies,

    This is another one which my hubby SMS-ed me years ago when I was still working....

    M - Morning morning My Dearest Pretty Girl
    E - Envious Tuft of Hair You Are About to Uncurl
    E - Eyes fully Open to Insert Lens on the Dark Beautiful Pearl
    N - Naturally Pouting Full Lips Ready for Sexy Smile R Instant Quarrel
    A - Attire Formal and Gait Confident U are One Complete Lady my Arms
    Would Always want to Curl
     
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    Sharada Senior IL'ite

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    Your name

    Your name has brought out the poet in your husband! I hope he doesn't mind your sharing all these private baatein with us? Have you written any poems for him?
    Talking about poems - when I was about 14 I was going by the toy train to Ooty. Some guys from Lovedale school were also in the same train. They were having a bet about who would recite a poem to a girl. One guy came up to me and said:

    "Come to me my love, oh come!
    I love you from my heart's bottom!
    I've loved you since the last Autumn!
    Oh, come to me my love, Oh come!"

    He said this and ran! I was too dazed to react and my friends were rolling over with laughter! Decades have passed, but I haven't forgotten the incident or the poem(neither have my friends!). My husband and son also had a good laugh when I told them about this!
    Sharada
     
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    meenaprakash Silver IL'ite

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    thanx for ur mail.........

    Dear Sharada,

    Nice to hear from u.

    No I've never written any poem for him - don't think I'm good at it...but I go hunting for the best cards with beautiful words and addon a few sentences of my love for him & arrange for candle-lit dinners at home; surprise him now and then - etc.

    It was nice to read about ur toytrain experience- those moments stay in our mind and definitely bring in a smile at the very thought of it.

    [FONT=&quot]Sharada, I just couldn't stop laughing for sometime after reading ur reply for my first mail.
    Unfortunately, the lyrics of all men tend to change over a period of time.



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