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Poem contest winner - my 7 year dd

Discussion in 'Kids Korner' started by vidhyalakshmid, May 16, 2014.

  1. vidhyalakshmid

    vidhyalakshmid IL Hall of Fame

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    Hello,
    My 7.5 year old daughter wrote this poem 3 months back.
    She won first prize in the poem competition conducted by
    Balagokulam childrens` magazine here in USA.
    This contest is for the kids residing in US.
    For your review and feedback.
     

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  2. Yashikushi

    Yashikushi Moderator IL Hall of Fame

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    Vidhya
    Just fantastic verses.Amazing your DD's vocabulary.[​IMG]
    I felt the warmth of the little kid's feeling(Friends apart),proving kid's world(happiness) cannot be created by elders.
    Convey my
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    [​IMG] to your sweet angel.

    Wishes to expose her talent all around.

    Thanks.
     
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    vidhyalakshmid IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks so much Saroj! Your words meant a lot to me.
    I will convey your wishes to my DD.
     
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    very very beautiful, please keep this spirit of writing always, such lovely thoughts expressed.
    wonderful ,
    winner all the way
     
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    Tavishi25 Gold IL'ite

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    Congratulations....
    nice poem,encourage her to write more....
     
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    Hi Agnath and Tavishi,
    Thanks for stopping by and for nice feedback. For Mothers` day she wrote a poem
    about me without anybody`s telling. It was first time in my life that somebody wrote a poem about me.
     
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    knbg Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Cute verses dear Vidhya....
    Best wishes to your multi talented young bud...!
    God bless!
     
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    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    Very nice poem by your daughter and congrats to her for winning the contest. She will become a great poet
     
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    vidhyalakshmid IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Bhargavi,
    Thanks for the kind wishes. IL ladies really great in giving excellent feedback.

    Viji Madam,
    Thanks for stopping by and wishing my daughter. Actually my daughter likes to be called as little poetess.
     
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    Hai Vidhya,
    Such wonderful way of writing from 7yr old.Heartiest Applause! Make her continue writing.Look the simile she had maintained! :2thumbsup:
     
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