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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Jan 1, 2018.

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  1. Jan 2, 2018 #11
    GeetaKashyap

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    Very true, dear Nandu @nandinimithun.
     
    GeetaKashyap, Jan 2, 2018
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    Happy New Year!

    wow very good narration... but very well narrated the thin line between compromise and sacrifice...very apt to today's world. People should have that clarity when they bother their loved ones. But in deed very matured decision and I repect the way they handled it. Kudos for your writing and thanks for giving us the story.
     
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    GK, your story is a classic example of conflict between career and love. Here, career wins, but I have seen many examples where love wins. I would have done the same thing as the protagonist did in the story. I don't like political leaders. I don't like feminists either. And if it's a combo, guess what?
     
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    GeetaKashyap

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    @peddadas

    Wish you a happy and prosperous new year.

    Thank you soooo much for liking this story and giving your analysis cum feedback. This helps me also to learn and improvise my work.
     
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    @Tamarakshar,
    Wish you a happy and prosperous new year.

    Thanks a lot for your feed back. I guess, I know reasonably well your likes and dislikes. But I have difficulty in linking those thoughts with the blue bird!!!! :) :) ;)
     
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    Thanks GK! I wish you the same. Don't question my sanity if I say that this profile picture is a signal to few special persons to recognise me.
     
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    @Tamarakshar,

    :tonguecrazy: How can I question your sanity, when I have already gone insane scratching my left over brains:thinking:
     
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    Romba romba nandri. I can't thank you enough for your encouraging comments.
     
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    Well narrated Geeta ma'am simply superb :clap2: I just loved the story line.
    I think may not forgo my love nor my Passion. :grinning:
    thanks for this lovely story ma'sm each one of us r different. i liked d lyrics too apt one. :banana:... I disagree with one statement of Sneha wer she mentions avi will not be able to understand the plight of ppl who r struggling just because the way he was brought up.

    Your sketches are beautiful ma'am. Keep rocking. :clap2:
     
    Adharv, Jan 3, 2018
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