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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Sep 9, 2018.

  1. Tamrakshar

    Tamrakshar Platinum IL'ite

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    When you were born
    I dunno if the God smiled.
    But your mom cried in joy
    And said a little angle's arrived.

    When you started walking
    I dunno if the Earth stopped.
    But your dad hugged and kissed your mom
    And said, it's the best day in my life.

    The first babble from your mouth
    Sounded so sweet to your father.
    He was in cloud nine, for the first time
    when you called him as your sire.

    When you came back crying from school
    As you had a fight with your friend.
    Your mom barged into her house
    And flustered her like a storm.

    When you were in sweet sixteen
    You looked like a flower fully blossomed.
    Time could have passed like a romantic voyage
    Without your Dad being the spoilsport.

    When you missed the medical exam
    The cherished dream of your dad.
    You cried your heart out
    But found your Dad's consoling words.

    He got you in a law school
    As your grannies had connections galore.
    You trudged through the rigour
    And Grandpa put you in a lawfirm offshore.

    Then came the time to marry you off
    To the bestest groom in the world
    Who would fulfil all your dreams
    And treat you like a baby doll.

    Everything was hunky-dory for a while
    Until you found one fine morn
    That a creature known as Mother-in-law
    Existed in the world like a thorn.

    You were shocked to find your hubby
    Whom you thought would be your dream
    Could take sides with his mom
    And let you suffer and scream.

    Before you could bat an eyelid
    You decided to leave
    In the open arms of your parents
    You found a great solace.

    Now that your parents have died
    You are alone in this world
    You looked at your grey hair
    And thought what if you were not overprotected?
     
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    why did i read this !! so dark !
    can i say i want my mommy !!!

    are you Ramsay Bolton ! ( google )
    goodnight !
     
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    No hitting below the belt please!
     
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    If she would have stayed with in-laws, grey hair would be least of her problems, LOL
     
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    If she was not overprotected,she could have dealt with all the thorns that affected her life
     
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    Thanks CE for the feedback! She didn't have to stay long, as she could have won over her husband by persuasive arguments to move into a new apartment. But, being overprotected, she didn't have the minimum patience.

    Nice profile picture, by the way!
     
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    Then she would be the bad dil who split the family
    Took the son away from the poor old parents. Sigh
     
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    That's the point, Sunshine! Lot of us, irrespective of the gender, have been overprotected. The parents, acting like an umbrella, actually, hinder the development of many important virtues, like patience, perseverance, will power etc in their children.
     
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    Yes, you are right! But, you know fixing reference frame is very important in solving any problem. Here, I am concerned about the well being of my subject. With the help of little bit of patience, she could have lived a far better life.
     
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    that was not the purpose...but nothing darker came to my sleepy mind...and i remember something you being male...i believe that...that why Bolton!

    Sorry! Really.
     

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