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Out On The Road

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by ChennaiExpress, Dec 1, 2017.

  1. ChennaiExpress

    ChennaiExpress Platinum IL'ite

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    Out on the Road
    Where we Heave
    Our Heavy Load

    Load of Documents
    Load of Groceries
    Load of Worries

    Out on the Road
    Clear Blue Sky
    Green Trees and Leaves

    Streets lines up with
    Brick and Mortar

    Brick and Mortar
    Lines One on Top
    Of Another

    That is Where we Are
    Is that where we are
    Meant to Be

    Out on the Road
    Driving Fast
    Driving Slow
    Making Sure the
    Horn Does not
    Blow

    Our Exit is Coming Up
    Be Pert
    Be Alert
    Or you'll be the Jerk

    Out on the Road
    Where the Sky is Blue
    The Grass is Green
    Is this where
    We are Meant to Be?
     
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  2. MonikaSG

    MonikaSG Silver IL'ite

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    Why don't you make one thread of my poetries. I am not able to understand in depth any of your poetry but the way you write is good. Keep it up:thumbup:
     
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  3. ChennaiExpress

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    Thank you Dear.

    Give me example of your poem, will try my best.

    Usually I write when feeling are flowing ..... I get the words to fit somehow.
     
  4. MonikaSG

    MonikaSG Silver IL'ite

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    Sorry you misunderstood the message. I want to say instead of making different threads for each poem you can make a single thread so that if someone wants to read your poem he can get all at one place. My poetry is used for your poetry not mine. I do not write poetry.
     
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    Ahhh, now I understand.

    Very well, I'll see about creating single poetry thread.

    Thank you Friend.
     
  6. satchitananda

    satchitananda Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice poem CE. I like Monika's suggestion.
     
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    If you have a beautiful companion, your journey becomes enjoyable! Indeed, your flow of words seems to be natural. :clap2:
     
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