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Oh No!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jan 22, 2019.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Here and there in that blue carpet
    He found a lot of animals and more.
    One stopped there;even winked at
    Him and ran, he don't know where.

    "Here comes the whitish fur rabbit!
    Oh! Look at those questioning ears!
    Don't you love it?", he paused a bit.
    I nodded as he munched a big pear.

    Oh! Don't miss that deer chase! See!
    He yelled as I looked up and saw
    A gigantic lion exhausting the
    Prey, mauling it with its paw.

    Somewhere he saw a plaited girl
    With a round face and he said,
    "Doesn't it look like Mercy Angel?"
    And shared when and how they met.

    I yawned and wanted to steer him
    To something that I wanted him to.
    "Look there! Can't you see all of them?
    Who put them there?" It seemed he knew!

    Whatever I tried didn't add up.
    My borrowed idea didn't just work.
    "Time to see Shin Chan!", he said
    And ran, as I stood there like a jerk!
     
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  2. Thyagarajan

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    :hello:
    Oh no “- these words became famous because these were uttered by First Lady when she as mrs John F Kennedy found bullets hurt heart of her husband bleeding when there limousine was proceeding toward...

    2. With this thought I opened and reached this lovely poem.
    3. Whence I felt, that I had arrived at Disney land when Mary Angel was patting rabbits amidst other big animals.
    4. Lovely lines woven with great care with choicest words that none of them redundant.
    Thanks and Regards.
     
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    Dear @Thyagarajan,

    Thanks for opening the account to this post with a nice feedback. Happy to receive them any day :).
    Just to elaborate, whatever they saw were shapes in the cloud and the gentle parent was trying to drag the child to read, but fails again. -rgs
     

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