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Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by rgsrinivasan, May 22, 2014.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Naren was a bit eager to meet Sathish after a long time. In fact, he could still remember the state Sathish was in, when he had to leave. He even worried a lot about Sathish then and tried his best to stay with him. But he had no choice as his family needed him to work and it was his first job that was in a town hundreds of miles away.

    He called Sathish's number as soon as he reached there, but there was no response. There were not much friends either. Hoping for good, he tried to concentrate on work then. He knew how much Sathish loved Nalini. Nalini was rich and Sathish was bright. He felt that it would never work out and warned Sathish every single day. But love being of that kind which forces one to try going beyond anything, made him to ignore what Naren said.

    The end for that love episode happened and happened too quickly. Nalini was no longer meeting him and Sathish's attempts to reach her went in vain. She was simply not found and Naren was warned that Sathish should not pursue looking out for her. He said that to Sathish, but Sathish understood only after being subjected to something unpleasant. Soon the news of Nalini's marriage reached them. Needless to say, Sathish looked shattered. Naren pitied him and just out of fear, stayed with him as much as possible in those days before he had to leave.

    Now thats all over, he returned after almost a year. He found Sathish after a couple of days, in an orphanage, being the cheery old self. Sathish had volunteered to serve them and the children there had a liking for him. "How could you be like this? I thought you would never recover!", said a relieved Naren.

    "Didn't you understand it yet? Sooner you will!", said Sathish, smiling.
     
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    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    Dear Srinivasan

    Love is not in control of anyone. It just happens and when it happens it is very difficult to avoid that, even if the front person loves you or not.

    Nice to see Sathish diverted his mind somewhere else, he has got so much of love in him that he is pouring it all on those orphan kids.
     
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    rgsrinivasan IL Hall of Fame

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    Thanks Aruna. Happy to see your quick and first feedback . And yes, you are right.
    Its not just diversion, but he understood the true meaning of love. Even had he tried to contain it, it would not have been possible. -rgs
     
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    Dear sir ,
    short and good story !!! Hope all boys who missed their love will just ignore the past and understand what true love is !!! But very few are like satish ..... Many are weird :bang .......
     
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    Love is a natural thing. I can say confidently Satish got the love dose very high. So he is seeing love every where. Very few people are blessed with this quality. The bag of LOVE is always full ,no matter how much you are spending .
     
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    You are right BrindhaK. Happy to receive a first from you. Thanks a lot for your feedback. Besides, many tend to think about relationship as something that they can play with. There lies the issue. You are quite correct. -rgs
     
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    Thanks a lot Pantu, for your nice feedback. Happy to receive a first from you.
    And you are absolutely right about love being always fuller. -rgs
     
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    Short but great message in the story :)
     
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    Thanks a lot Sindhurak, for your appreciation and like. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     

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