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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jskls, Mar 17, 2018.

  1. jskls

    jskls IL Hall of Fame

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    No one ..,

    No one would
    Love me
    Like you did

    No one would
    Care for me
    Like you did

    No one would
    Forgive me
    Like you did

    No one could
    Heal my pain
    Like you did

    No one would
    Keep me in
    Their thoughts
    Like you did

    No one would
    Support me
    Like you did

    No one would
    Understand me
    Like you did

    No one would
    Realize the
    Bond between us

    Life feels Empty
    Without your
    Presence...or
    Blessings

    Waiting for
    Another lifetime
    Another chance

    To be your
    Little girl
    Once again ....
     
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  2. Mistt

    Mistt Platinum IL'ite

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    Lakshmi,
    I can understand you. Maybe your father is not with you physically but he watches you from the distance and showers his blessings on you always. Take Care !
     
  3. iyerviji

    iyerviji Finest Post Winner

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    He will be always blessing u
    From.wherever he is

    He will be always guiding you

    Everyone has to leave the world
    One day
    His time came so he had to go

    I also lost my dad when I was
    18yrs your poem brought me
    Memories of my dad
     
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    fatherly affection well expressed, do remember he would love you to be remembered the same way by your children...
     
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    Thanks Mistt. Wrote this for his anniversary. I hardly share it in outside world. I just express it here. Thanks again
     
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    Thanks @iyerviji mmaa for your consoling words. Yes I remember how you took care of your father too.
    so true.
     
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    Thank you! That’s such a high bar for me. I wonder if I ever will reach that high.
     
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    @jskls Superp.Nothing can be compared with Father's love
     
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    Thanks Periamma yes Parents Love is unconditional and incomparable
     
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