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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Jan 12, 2018.

  1. Scorpio707

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    Breathe,breathe,breathe.
    I tell myself as I’m drifting off in sleep.
    Drowning in a hollow stream,
    faces of the past emerge from,
    nowhere it seems.
    Memories of a bygone era.
    Times of fun and frolic.
    Days of glory and thunder,
    Everything feels so real.
    I laugh a little as my eyes beam.
    The flow of water definitely knows,
    what I must see.
    A bit of joy, a bit of sorrow and
    unfulfilled dreams.
    Coming to the edge I look back,
    at all that was once me.
    A light ahead then beckons me,
    I wake up brushing off this,
    hallucinating dream.
    Treading along the path ahead,
    as yet another new beginning welcomes me.
     
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  2. GeetaKashyap

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    Interesting! Dreams can sometime make life miserable yet at times give rare insights into life. New beginning is the silver cloud!
     
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    Thank you.
     
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    True. Thanks for stopping by.
     
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    Dear Meenu @Scorpio707 ,

    So nice to read you again during this time of the year. If it were up to me, I would be celebrating every day. Hang on a minute, I do celebrate - just that some turn out well and some not so well, as you describe so poetically!

    I loved the lines I have quoted below. I often try to look back and see all that was me and I am hoping I am always walking towards a better me.

    New beginnings always assure us that the best is yet to come! Hope to see more of you!
     
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    @Srama

    So nice to hear from you Sabitha. Liked the way you put it out here, in your own style :).
    Was hoping you would get a chance to read this one, and glad you did :thumbsup:. Thank you.
     

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