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MY TRYST WITH LOVE(part3)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by mums, Jan 19, 2012.

  1. mums

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    http://www.indusladies.com/forums/snippets-of-life-non-fiction/156383-my-tryst-with-love-part1.html

    http://www.indusladies.com/forums/snippets-of-life-non-fiction/156805-my-tryst-with-love-part2.html


    My mind is filled with so many ideas, regarding dresses.

    What to wear?which color? Indian or Western or in-between?:bonk
    Finally made decision to wear Indian outfit.

    Now comes the question of color....there are specific meaning for each and every color(worn only on V-day). Pink signifies i m already with a date. So i decided to go with pink dress.:thumbsup


    I have kept everything ready. Hmm m..... something seems to be missing.......gift.

    What to buy??
    Where to buy??


    After another round of mega discussion with my brain, i decided to buy a wallet.
    Wanted to keep my photo inside it before getting it packed. But thought its not a good idea tsk


    Just a day remaining for date.

    My face was glowing like never before.
    So, if everyone have BF then there is no need for facials.... fain n lovely,fair ever,L'Oreal.......


    Feb 14TH..
    got up early,
    dressed up carefully.


    Reached college.Veena and Mohit had come, but Sandy was missing.


    I waited for some time looking at the door:crazy


    He came in.
    Was wearing a nice shirt(white color--means already booked). I was blushing since i had only selected that shirt. Thought of wishing.....but then kept quite thinking i will wish later in the afternoon(@ DATE).



    Just glanced at the clock...just 4hours to go....was searching for phone number of Earth.......i wanted to dial and tell earth to rotate fast.....i could feel butterflies dancing inside my stomach.....is it called LOVE? does it happen to everyone on first date?? since he came late, couldn't take a break for canteen.....who cares when i m going out for lunch??


    I could listen to the palpitation of my heart with each minute.

    Finally the day has come...just waiting for the moment....


    Its 11.50am
    Sandy goes out for tea break.


    My phone rings "SANDY CALLING"


    I am very shy to pick up the call.
    Mustard the courage......finally picked it.


    He tells--" DEAR I M GOING HOME NOW"


    "CAN WE GO FOR DATE SOME OTHER DAY?"


    "YOU WONT MIND IT?"


    All hell broke loose:evil::evil:.

    I said-- "Sure no problem"



    I was shocked......

    (Dint want to relocate ocean from my eyes to college).



    Took permission for leave and went to catch bus.


    I dint have much energy to think about what went wrong.......because all my energy was consumed to stop me from crying in public:oops:.


    My bus was moving towards that Restaurant.......i couldn't keep glance away from it.


    Many vehicles were parked outside the restaurant.


    After a second, bus gave a stopping near the restaurant. People got down and few got in.


    I noticed a known bike.......known person......Sandy was parking the bike...........and a girl was carrying his helmet........that girl was my dear friend Veena........:drowning



    Thanks dear friends for your feed back.
     
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  2. rosy786

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    m first to read this..jolly

    Aiyayo...Friend is villi ah here??????

    Very nice narration and My heart was beating fast when read this...
     
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  3. g3sudha

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    mums


    too gooD
    kalakiteenga
     
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    Very well written!!! You are too good in explaining emotions :)
    So had he used this girl to try his dialogue before telling to veena? :-(
     
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    what happened next..........so sad for her.......... post next mums
     
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    Well written one... So villi role started ah?
     
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    Gals,
    Why do you want to say Veena, a villi? This guy playing with two gals is the villain :-(
     
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    mmmmm mmmm.... i feel alugachi alugachiya
     
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    Both are villians as made our Mums cry...dnt worry.....I invite them to my home and give my cooking and kill them
     
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    Hey, mums..
    Read the 3 parts.. it s lovely & humurous writing from you...

    But this one is too good dear and I didnt expected this twist....and could feel the pain...But r u going to surprise with something good in next episode.. like they r just teasing something like that.. Pl dnt put a heartbreak in this cute love story my dear!!!

    And i must say that i could not stop laughing while reading this...

     
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