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MY TRYST WITH LOVE(part1)

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by mums, Jan 12, 2012.

  1. mums

    mums Platinum IL'ite

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    Hello Friends.
    This is my first post in Non-fiction thread. I request all to bear with my grammatical mistakes.I have divided the post into few parts which is unknown to myself. I even request Moderator to delete this if found irrelevant.

    It was a boring afternoon.... Sandy enters room with his normal hunk smile:) and even i needed some company.

    He checks his phone and giggles at me. After much hesitation... he tells Valentines day is 2months away.
    Does tht matter for a Boyfriend resistant girl like me?????:rant

    I asked him --so what?? is he planning to take bath only on that day??


    If he has said yes also i would have survived, but instead asked--

    WILL U BE MY DATE ON THT DAY??

    w..wh... wha... what date.I m literally :drowning:drowning. I have heard all 28, 30,31 dates... even lion dates, Dubai date...but whats this new DATE??


    I just felt like an Alien on earth and not like Alice in wonderland. I dont know all the words in English diction but to my knowledge i hated this word the most and even dreaded that this day should never come.

    I know him as a good friend..... we go to canteen together....we joke a lot.......but i do that with every guys. So why was he asking me out???

    Forget my answer for that Q....i couldn't even scan that question in my brain.


    His phone rang.....and he left in hurry by picking the call. Yes he smiled at me and signaled hand for bye before leaving.

    Now i have another doubt all of a sudden. Is phones manufactured for these kind of purposes only?There are 24hrs in a day, why the hell he got the call that moment only?

    I was in dilemma ..which was the most important question for me....Date? or those unexpected phone calls?:hide:

    Yes this dilemma means a third question was born.

    I just left all 3 questions in that room and was about to leave....

    Wait... should i be thankful to the room since what happened was historical event in my loveless life?
    Should i paste nice paintings and make the room look more attractive?

    I saw the room, it wasn't happy nor sad.
    Many would have even proposed in that room before my incident.
    The room may be 25 to 30yr old. Will it really bother to be happy for every dates proposed in there?? I doubt it.
    See i m such a poor soul..i m thinking about room with my head already filled with 3questions.

    Packed bag and left to home.

    Got the seat in bus, was enjoying all the scenery outside and could feel the freshness of the air entering my nasal cavity.

    I could sense a change in me. Or-else why the hell would i enjoy nature,than dozing off in the hard earned bus seat (its hard earned bcoz u known na its difficult to get seats in evening times).

    To be continued............in next part.

    I thank my friends in MOVIE THREAD:bowdown, who are instrumental in changing me from a silent reader to the current poster.(if the above story is boring then it might mean other way round).
    Will sign off in my favorite Banamil
    Thanksungo.:wave
     
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    zingy Local Champion Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    First fb . Padichitu vandhu update panren

    Update: Before I begin if it had been now I know what you would have said immediately ?

    Poor guy, took so much efforts to propose and made arrangements for the phone call .
    Instead of thinking How cute he is ? you are thinking about how old the rooms is ?

    Cute post dear . Post the next part soon

    Update2:
    You would have said. I have cast my vote for sofea and you should also vote for her
     
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    rosy786 IL Hall of Fame

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    Very Cute and Nice dear..

    I rushed up to comment My wishes First..
    keep going

    Chaaa.......Zingy you over took me...But i only read first...bow bow
     
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    mums Platinum IL'ite

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    Thanks Zingy and Lazy Rosy.
    Thanks again, hope u will demand for part 2 also!!!!!!!!
     
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    zingy Local Champion Staff Member Platinum IL'ite

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    I have already asked for it .

    Also You didn't answer my question . I have put it in bold
     
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    Sofea IL Hall of Fame

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    Nice one Mums. Didn't know you were against love before this ;-) Now you seem to be one of the most lovable one around :) Interesting narration. Waiting to hear more about your tryst with love :thumbsup Haha, yes! I'm demanding for part 2!
     
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    Answer will be in PM.(to save myself)
     
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    mums Platinum IL'ite

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    I will wait some time for moderators response and then will post next part.

    Bcoz its not movie thread na.....!!!
     
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    Sofea IL Hall of Fame

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    Why don't you ask the Moderator themselves? ANyway, if not here, you can always move this thread to Stories (Fiction) section :thumbsup
     
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    Oh it deserves that section also???
     
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