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My dd's first attempt in writing poems !!!!!!!!!

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  1. mssunitha2001

    mssunitha2001 IL Hall of Fame

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    Clay Crafts
    It’s fun to laugh
    And play
    To make something
    Out of clay
    We can make a
    Goose or a hen
    And a big, big pen
    Let’s sit under
    The sun
    To have
    some more fun.

    Going to the Museum
    I went to the museum
    To see amazing things
    And I also wanted to learn
    How birds fly with their wings
    I saw the fossils of a dinosaur
    Very big and tall
    I was very scared
    And hoping it wont fall
    It was’nt really sunny
    Bcos the roof covered the sun
    It was a good day
    And we had a lot of fun.

    My friends
    I have a lot of friends
    Who always help me
    When I am sick
    They always come to see me
    When I am ok
    They’ll call me out to play
    In the fall
    I’ll say ok and play with the
    Pretty ball
    It’s always a happy
    Inspiration
    And we’ll never have a
    Separation.

    The Beach
    With my family
    I went to the beach
    When I looked down
    I saw a leech
    I got scared and
    Did’nt want to see
    When I opened my eyes
    I saw a big tree
    I ran upto it
    I looked under,
    It was full of sweets
    Then the pretty birds flying
    Started to tweet.


    Happy Moments in May

    I always have a happy
    moment
    And a happy
    Comment
    I never am sad
    And never am bad
    Every day is a happy Day
    And it will be happy
    The whole May

    My Graduation Day
    When I had my graduation
    It was a happy occasion
    It’s always a happy inspiration
    To my whole nation.

    My family
    I have a family
    Very nice and kind
    I would buy any toy
    If they dont mind
    If I like that toy
    I would buy it
    If they allow me
    I would agree to it.


    Me and my Brother

    Me and my brother
    Oh, what a fight
    But, I would quarrel too
    At the night
    I start it first
    I don’t know why
    But if he starts it
    I would cry
    After a while
    We would say
    We are “sorry”
    When we got on the bed
    We heard a lorry.

    Birds

    I saw two little birds
    Sitting on a nest
    They were so cute
    And I thought
    They were the Best.
    Are we twins ?

    Are we twins ?
    Coz we are the same
    And our family put
    Us a different name
    So that we know who we are
    And we are sisters after all.
    Nature
    The nature
    Is beautiful
    God made for us all
    There are toys just
    Like a ball
    As you know Nature
    Is so mature.


     
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  2. swee2

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    Very nice yarr... How old is ur dd??
     
  3. mssunitha2001

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    Thanks dear swee2....she is 9 years old !!!!!!!!!
     
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    she really has a talent in writing and you should develop and encourage it.,
    for a 9 year old , shes done a great job!
     
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    :thumbsupLoved it! Loved it! Loved it! Terrific work from your daughter!:thumbsup

    Love,
    Anuradha
     
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    Thank you dear Innerbliss !!!!!!!!!!!
     

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