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Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Scorpio707, Jul 5, 2017.

  1. Scorpio707

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    Chirping of birds,
    Sound of breeze,
    Bustle of leaves,
    Walking footsteps,
    As the cars sweep,
    Scorching sun is shining bright,
    Eyes twitch when you foresight,
    Ducks and geese are on the other side,
    Flapping and quacking,
    My ears are now perched,
    Thoughts submerged,
    Feel the beat of my heart,
    Slow and steady,
    Basking in that moment I beam,
    Closing my eyes to enjoy the zeal.





     
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    vaarae vaa scorps super

    must be an ENT specialist you :):):)
     
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    Dear Meenu,

    All that you have described can do this
    Loved it. Enjoy and bring out more for us.
     
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    Hahaha...lol. ENT, nope...maybe it's just the poetry lover in me :D:p.
     
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    Thanks Sabitha. So glad to hear from you :) .
     
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    The world's a lovely place when the heart is thumping high and mind at peace - well described! :clapclap::clapclap:
     
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    there are many special moments, we need to feel &lock it in our memories. you have found such a one.
     
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    Thanks Cielo.
     
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    True, moments are myriad. Thank you.
     
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    A truly wonderful moment penned beautifully :thumbsup:
     
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