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Missing You!

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by rgsrinivasan, Jan 11, 2012.

  1. rgsrinivasan

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    Sometimes I see you happy
    At times, you look so sad.
    But I am always happy,
    To be there for you, lad!

    Of late, you don't see me
    Often, I don't know why.
    It is never late for me
    You can come even now!

    You know where I am,
    And that I can't move.
    So desperate now I am.
    To be kept waiting now.

    I reflect you so good.
    Heck! It was my job!
    My reflection should
    Reach you dear! I sob!

    At last, you come to me.
    And spot drops of water.
    Wrinkling, you wipe me
    With an old cloth, harder.

    What else can I do,
    Other than show you dear?
    If you come rarely too,
    I won't be shedding tears.

    Note: A mirror's monologue to its man
     
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  2. swaathiha

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    Nice poem, RG.
     
  4. rgsrinivasan

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    Thanks a lot Swaathiha. Happy to receive a first from you. -rgs
     
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    Thanks a lot for your appreciation Shanta. Happy to receive a first [isn't it?] from you. -rgs
     
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    Asusual Good one RGS...

    And Mirror Blog ka yaad aaya tha...
     
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    Yes, Its just as you said Pallavi4Me. Only here, if you take it to a person who reflects like a mirror and feels a lot happier when the seer is happy himself. Thanks. -rgs
     

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