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Maggar Singh, My Saviour

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by GeetaKashyap, Jan 8, 2018.

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  1. Jan 9, 2018 #21
    GeetaKashyap

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    @Archanaanchan

    Thanks, Archu. I look forward to your constructive comments and criticism :)
     
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    @GeetaKashyap

    Interesting turn! The images you have chosen support the story very well reminding of graphic novels. The line, "Boss, she is, after all…after all, just a woman. In our male-dominated society, where have we given women the rights to express? If they want the tag of being a ‘good woman’, aren’t they supposed to nod and agree with us all the time? Don’t ask me to be like her.... " is very meaningful reflecting the attitude of a major part of the society we live in. A good set of dialogues too, well done!
     
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    @Frangipani

    Thanks for grasping the key point of the story and appreciating my efforts in making this story a different experience. Luckily on the internet I found apt images of Tamil actor Dhanush and Alia Bhatt, that brought a new perspective to the story. Hope you will be with me for the next four parts too.:)
     
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    @Archanaanchan

    Archu, why only these silent likes? Why aren't you commenting? I would love to have your perspective.
     
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  5. Jan 10, 2018 #25
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    I don't have words for you Geets ... You are such a talent I must say, that is beyond IL .. There is so much depth in your writing . Its difficult to catch readers mood and imagination with writing . If you have done it You have WON it !!
     
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    Archu,

    Idu swalpa jaasti aaytu, mari. I am seriously looking for feedback and an active interaction so that I can improvise my work.
    Thanks for breaking your silence ;)
     
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    I liked the idea of using posting pictures . The imagined role came very realistic to me. Now I am watching this as a movie . Alia and Dhanush .... I am only wishing Alia reaches home safe . I am only thinking Dhanush is never opting a negative role. Side by side there is also a thought about Alia's parents .

    I am waiting for answers in the next episode .
     
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    Archu @Archanaanchan

    Hmm..that's nice, thanks dear. Let's see what all twists and turns this story takes.
     
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    HI @GeetaKashyap
    Your story is truly a lovely one. I loved the unexpected twist in part two. That was brilliant.
    Can't wait to read the rest. Don't make us wait too long ma!.

    You see we cannot have the lovely food items you are posting; at least let us have the complete feast of your writing.
     
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  10. Jan 10, 2018 #30
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    Superwoman @kkrish,

    Awww...thanks a lot for encouraging me. I will be posting a part everyday. This story has about 6000+ words; a little bit long for one sitting so in keeping with the spirit of the 'serialized story' (in this story), I divided it into six parts. Please read all the parts and give me your constructive suggestions and criticisms.:)
     
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