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Love You To The Moon & The Back - A Bunch Of Love

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  1. IniyaaSri

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    Thanks Lata dear! Happy to see your comment.:blush:
    Will be posting today's episode dear.
    Let me know your thoughts on it :blush:
     
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    Episode 9:

    It was Saturday noon and Lekha was reading a novel sitting in her room. Her mind was very much thinking about Sunday and it took her time to restrict her mind. The day went as such and it was already 10 and Lekha came to her bed.

    She changed her dress and washed her face. She looked at the calendar as she wiped her face.

    Tomorrow morning, HE will come here. She did not understand why she was feeling excited.

    Excited? Really? Or am nervous? Lekha thought and turned off the light and lied down quietly.

    What will I talk to him tomorrow?

    Will he ask too many questions to me? Like an interview?

    He will be asking do I have any past and all? In my cousin’s case, the guy asked her na… May be he will also ask me..

    What else he will tell about him…

    And what should I ask him?

    Will he have any girlfriends or something? May be a past and he is overcoming that?

    He has been to other countries as well. He will be having much exposure. Will he like me?

    Will he be open to me?

    May be he will think am not very stylish kind?

    Because of that he will say no?

    At the bottom of the heart, Lekha was longing to see that face. The face which just showed a new Lekha to herself. That was the first time she was feeling that way. And she very well knew that there is no meaning for this feeling and it was totally weird since she don’t even know him.

    Her parents have brought this proposal. The families were ok with each other. She was waiting for God to proceed further. Though she was ready for 'Yes' as well as 'No', she wanted to marry him. Don’t know why. That weird beautiful feeling was making her to think that way.

    Lekha was tired of thinking much and she breathed heavily and said “Its your responsibility God! But I will be happy if it is a “Yes” saying this she covered her face with her blanket and kept smiling for no reason.

    It was around 3 o clock she slept after much trouble.

    Her alarm rang at 7 o clock and she woke up at once.

    “My God! Let me start now itself. So that I will be ready before 10” saying this she swiftly went inside her bathroom.

    After half an hour, she came out wrapping the towel on her head.

    She turned on the ceiling fan and removed her towel.

    She opened her cupboard and took her Salwar which she has kept ready two days back.

    She wore that plain dark green silk salwar suit. The red bottom and matching dupatta was making her glow with radiance. That was gifted by her friends for her birthday.

    She pulled her table drawer and took her hair dryer and plugged it. She set it to “Cool air” and blew all over hair. Her hair was drying slowly.

    She took her earing box and wore a medium sized glittering chandelier earrings. Then she wore her thin matching neck set and bangles.

    By then her hair was completely dry and her silky wavy hair looked healthy and radiant.

    She took a glittering hair clip and pinned it at the centre and left the remaining hair to flow.

    It was already 9.30 by then and Lekha was done with her face powder and lip balm.

    “Lekha ready? Have your breakfast now. Seems the guy will be here in another 15 minutes. Just now he called.” – Lekha’s mom

    “In another 15 minutes? Just 15 more minutes?” Lekha felt nervous

    “Lekha!! Come down. Breakfast is on the table” – Once more her mom called her

    She came down swiftly and had a big glass of water

    “Maaa. I don’t feel like having breakfast. Will have later” – Lekha

    “By the way pin some flowers on your hair. Take it from the fridge” – Lekha’s mom.

    “No ma. I don’t want” – Lekha

    “why dear? ” – Lekha’s dad looked at her

    “No dad! Please! Not in mood for flowers and all now” - Lekha

    “Tensed?”- her dad

    “Hmmm yes dad” – Lekha said as she climbed the steps

    “Don’t worry darling! Everything will be fine”

    - Her dad smiled at her

    Lekha sat on her bed and kept seeing the clock. She was feeling quite nervous.

    After 10 minutes, she heard her mom calling her down

    “Lekha! Come down! Amar has come”

    She was gasping heavily and she started to sweat.

    She walked down the steps slowly.

    “There he is. The man who deprived me off my breath.” Lekha stood in front of him as such mesmerized and tensed.

    “Lekha dear! Why are you standing! Sit na” – She heard her dad

    “Yeah Yeah! Please take your seat” – Amar

    She heard his voice for the first time.

    She sat on the sofa. Both were facing each other.

    That same charming face she saw in facebook. That smile. – Lekha thought

    Lekha’s mom has prepared fresh pineapple juice and served to Amar.

    Amar was sipping the juice slowly and looked at Lekha’s beautiful face every now and then.

    Lekha reciprocated the same.

    “You guys can talk freely in the terrace” – Lekha’s dad smiled at Amar.

    At once Amar kept the juice glass as such and stood up.

    Lekha’s mom tried hiding her smile.

    Lekha got up slowly and climbed the stairs as Amar followed her.

    She couldn’t believe that the guy for whom she fell secretly is walking behind her.

    They reached the terrace. It was a lovely terrace Amar has ever seen. That big terrace was beautifully arranged with pots of flowers and herbs.

    There was a shady area and a swing. Both walked towards that.

    Lekha was standing nervously without knowing what to do.

    She stood fidgeting her fingers without looking at Amar.

    Amar stood as such looking at her.

    That was a beautiful round face. Just like a moon. Lovely Shiny hair. Tension patches all over her face.

    Beautiful earrings that danced and a decent dressing sense.

    Amar kept smiling looking at her. Just looking at her? Admiring every tiny detail in her.

    He just kept a couple of steps towards her and Lekha tried to move back.

    He came near her and looked directly in her eyes. Lekha tried to lift her face and look at him.

    She was feeling terribly shy to look at him directly.

    Amar kept seeing her face. Kept seeing all her moves. Kept seeing how she was wetting her lips out of tension. Kept seeing her every move in her cheeks. Her eyes were looking here and there and blinked swiftly.

    Amar stood quiet waiting for her to start the conversation but it was vain. She stood expecting him to start the conversation. Amar thought let me keep admiring her till she opens her mouth herself and stood smiling at her.

    The thing which Lekha never ever imagined happened. May be no one would have encountered that in the first meeting.
     
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    Again a suspense...waiting for next update Iniyaa.....
     
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    Nice going Iniyaa.
     
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    Next update is tomorrow Ammu dear:thumbsup:
    Have a pleasant day ahead:blush::blush::blush:
     
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    Thanks dear :blush::blush::blush:
     
  7. dhanalakshmidev

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    Dear iniya
    You are a perfect writer...The way you narrate the story kept me visualising scene by scene in my mind like watching a movie..
    Great going iniyaa....keep up the good work
     
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    Hi ,
    Just logged into Indus ladies and ur stories read all at a time Superb narration .scences as though happening in front of our eyes.
    earlier story love vs arranged and this story characters r diff right.
    U said u were continuing with the same characters.had a little doubt.
    Good going iniyaa
     
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    oh really... what happened next ??? :kissingheart::hearteyes::kissingheart::hearteyes:
    --PS
     
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    Hey thanks Lakshmi dear :grinning:
    Happy that you are able to visualize scene by scene.
    Thanks a lot for your support!
    Highly motivating:blush::blush::blush:
     
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