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  1. Nishanaini2908

    Nishanaini2908 Senior IL'ite

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    :wave: Hello, ladies, this is Nisha and i just tried to write a story please let me know the fed backs so that i can improve :kissingheart: love you all.

    # 1
    It's 6: 45 and Nisha want to reach her tuition on time and she was about to cross the road, she saw her colic and she shouted louder saying, Vinuth please wait for me

    Hi vinuth can you please drop on the way I have to go tuition and it is really very important for me to go –Nisha

    Ha ok comes I will drop you –Vinuth

    Thank you –Nisha

    It's Ok and by the way, what tuitions and where should I drop you –Vinuth

    Ha, I am going to my classes I got my exams near na and please drop me in Patny station –Nisha

    Hmm, ok –Vinuth

    Please stop here, Hey, thank you vinuth if you are not there I won't be reaching on time –Nisha

    That’s Okay –vinuth

    Bye –Nisha

    Bye bye –Vinuth

    Nisha reached her tuition on time and her sir started the class, everything was good, but her friend Sangeetha is not at all active in class and she is just chatting with someone and smiling

    Hey, put your phone aside please concentrate –Nisha

    Ha ok ok, wait – Sangeetha

    After some time, the class ends and all started moving and Nisha got surprised to see her friend Anil waiting near the gate

    oye what oye waiting for who? tell na aaaaa-Nisha

    No, nothing ma I am waiting for you only –Anil

    Don’t lie, I know you we’re waiting for Sangeetha a –Nisha

    Hmm- Anil

    I know everything ;)–Nisha

    Ha you know everything dayam :p –Anil

    Meanwhile, Sangeetha came smiling and started blushing:relaxed:

    oye, so you were chatting with this person in class –Nisha

    Hmm, yeah nisha-Sangeetha

    hmmm fine I am going home, you two love birds enjoy –Nisha

    Ha ok ma bye bye-Anil

    Bye vy come early tomorrow and keep texting me –Sangeetha

    Ha ok bye take care –Nisha

    It is almost 9:30 clock and Nisha reached her home and then she got fresh

    Dad, I am hungry what did you cook:yum: –Nisha

    Ha eat then why you asking me when you eat, you will know what cooked –Dad

    she sat for her dinner and she can smell chicken, dad thank you for yummy yummy chicken I loved it.

    She ate, how much it fit in her tummy and she then went to sleep:sleeping:
     
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    sreeram IL Hall of Fame

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    Welcome to IL Nisha... Good start... All the best to you.
     
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    Thank you so much Priya:blush: nice to met you
     
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    Good start :) Eagerly waiting to know what next :)
     
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    hmmm thank you meerasrini very soon i will post my next epsd :blush:
     
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    #2

    The other day nisha woke up and got fresh and then she started cooking for lunch and breakfast . She finished her breakfast and took to lunch box and said bye to her dad and younger sister she dressed in nice plain black full hands patiyala dress and she tied her curly hair with banana clip and kept her kajal she look simple and cute
    she reached her office and started her day as usual same work same office same people when working she got into notice that someone looking at her she tried to see who is that and turned her head she saw vinuth standing near her desk


    Hey hi vinuth how r you?--- Nisha
    M good , so did u reach your tuition on time yesterday ? -vinuth
    hmmm yeah thank you so much ----Nisha
    That's okay -vinuth
    By the way, where do you stay? -Nisha
    I stay in neeridmet x roads and you -Vinuth
    I stay in malkajgiri -Nisha
    ooho ok its near to my home -Vinuth
    oo yeah I never know -Nisha
    vinuth if you don't mind can you please drop me daily -Nisha
    ha ok but sometimes I cannot please don't mind -vinuth
    this okay drop me whenever you can -Nisha


    Days pass by they both became friends and vinuth always use to drop her near her tuition

    Nisha work for an IT company and she is in logistics department
    she started her work from the age of 18 years and starting doing her degree in open university along with her working experience she is a very hard working girl that she support her dad and take care of house she is very friendly, smart and cute girl

    nisha stay with her dad and sister and her mom left them when she is in class 3 from then to till now her dad is the only person who takes care of her and her sister

    It’s 6: 30 in the evening and she still working on something and then she saw vinuth near her desk
    Hey vinuth you going now? - Nisha
    yeah you coming or not -Vinuth
    I am coming please wait for me na - nisha
    Yeah that's ok please come fast –vinuth
    after sometime she got a call from her friend
    Hello-Nisha
    Hello nisha Sangeetha here -Sangeetha
    ha by tell what happen -Nisha
    Nisha sir said he will come to the class little late so don't be hurry come slow and be careful -Sangeetha
    Yeah thank you, bye –Nisha
    Here we go your stop as come get down -Vinuth
    Oo yeah thank you vinuth –Nisha
    nisha stood there with him and they both were talking on a topic
    nisha you look beautiful in the black dress did you ever noticed me I always look at you whenever you wear that dress- vinuth
    ha thank you but I never noticed it sorry and I want to ask you something can I ask you ?- nisha
    yeah sure -vinuth
    Nisha took her both hand near his cheeks and pulled them saying your very chubby chubby what you do for this chubby cheeks he once laughed and said what I will do nothing
    ooh yeah nothing ah please tell me the secret na:p -Nisha

    when these both are talking and having fun suddenly a voice came from her back

    Nishaaaaa
    nisha turned to see who is that girl she saw Archana
    hoo hi Archana come here see him how chubby he is ............. --nisha
    no ways:rage: you come here I want to talk something - Archana
    fine coming , bye vinuth talk to you later- nisha
    ha Archana what happen -Nisha
    what you doing there with that guy:argue: - Archana
    what ? what I did and what is doing there nothing we are just talking - nisha
    do you called its talking I saw you:argue: - archana
    hey hey why are you so angry - nisha
    Archana kept quite
    nisha just go on thinking what happened why she got mad and why she is so angry and what happen to her

    Archana and nisha are colic and almost best friends in office they are 3 girls very close to each other i.e nisha, Jyothi and Archana

    nisha just go on thinking what happen to her and what she did she is very tensed and confused :disrelieved:then she tried calling Jyothi and told her whole story what as happen:disrelieved:
     
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    hi nisha, welcome to IL, urs n the heorine name is same. n u r from Hyderabad i guess
     
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    Going interestingly... Waiting for next.
     
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    hi srilaxmi and yeah m from hyderabad :)
     
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    thnk you
     
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