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LOVE BLOSSOM - Episode 16

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sapthu02, Feb 14, 2012.

  1. shashiv

    shashiv Gold IL'ite

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    Well such a horrible man Naren is.... Pity Kayal....



    shanti
     
  2. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    thanks for all your replies.

    yet more horrible things yet to happen in Kayal's life before she is completely out of it.
     
  3. swaran

    swaran IL Hall of Fame

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    Sapthu,

    Your writing is getting far and far better as you proceed with the episodes..and the way you are taking the story is too too good...i really loved it...
    you explain in a very simple english,thats one thing i really love in your writing...
    All the best!!!!!!

    and about this episode,i really felt very bad for kayal eventhough its just a imaginary story(i hope) :-(
     
  4. Sofea

    Sofea IL Hall of Fame

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    Hi Sapthu,

    I'm so sorry that I could not visit this site and read your wonderful story all these while. I read episode 9-16 in one go and what a story gal! :thumbsup

    I really pity Kayal but thought that it was kinda weird that she agreed to marry him merely due to the video. Wished she had at least obtained Mithra and her parents' help instead of just agreeing to marry Naren blindly.

    And Naren! OMG what a cruel guy!! It's so scary to know how some people who seemed normal on the outside turn to become psycho in real life. But it does happen I guess. I've heard of similar stories such as this before.

    Keep writing Sapthu. I just hope that you will give a happy ending for Kayal. Poor gal, she seems to be suffering a lot :-(
     
  5. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    Yeah Swaran and Sofea. Its an imaginary story indeed. But there are ppl of these kind still existing..
    and more over Kayal will face some more cruelity before she is off this relationship...
     
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    Excellent narration!!!
    I feel very bad for kayal...
    Hope soon she will give a peaceful life !!!
     
  7. sapthu02

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    i too wish the same madhumitha
     
  8. Lalitha Shivaguru

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    Dear Sapthu,

    Story is going good....

    But poor Kayal.... why should Naren be so cruel & heartless?
     
  9. sapthu02

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    thats his character Lalitha.. its not yet over..
     
  10. LakshmiArun

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    Hi sapthu,

    This story is touching.. Kayal romba pavam. From her childhood till now she is not happy.. When will she live for her own life?
     

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