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LOVE BLOSSOM - Episode 14

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by sapthu02, Feb 10, 2012.

  1. LoukyaDevi

    LoukyaDevi Silver IL'ite

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    Hi Sapthana,

    Kayal's life is miserable. How can Naren call this love? After his character turned grey, I expect Sathya will be united with Kayal......Climax ;-)


    A small correction:
    Though his eyes were looking at Kayal, my mind was lost somewhere. He cursed himself for doing this and also for not leaving the place.


    Instead of my mind, make it his mind.
     
  2. swaran

    swaran IL Hall of Fame

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    oh sapthu..i never expected naren to be this bad..but when i keep reading ,i understood that naren has done some nasty thing but this again is really bad...
    lets see what happens next...
    you are really rocking dear...loved all your lines sapthu :thumbsup
     
  3. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    thanks ppl. I have now posted the next episode
    loukya - will correct the words, unable to do them as iam at home as certain feautures are unavailable for me. will get back to office tomorrow..
     
  4. sujamom

    sujamom New IL'ite

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    HEY SAPTHU,even i too expected that last min satya will marry her..but wht he got married and the reason for the enforcement was so cruel..isnt it..and ur comment "the real cruelty hasn't begun yet" so kayal has to go long way iin her life only with cruel people or what? ..good story ofcourse waiting for it
     
  5. Lalitha Shivaguru

    Lalitha Shivaguru Platinum IL'ite

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    Omg... so mean of Naren... It is so repulsive...

    After hearing to all this once again, what would Kayal do now?
     
  6. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    Kayal will have to live her life. Just now her married life has started..
     
  7. sujamom

    sujamom New IL'ite

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    Hi Sapthu,
    what is the time interval will u take to post one episode..u will not believe atleast 10 times i refreshed and checked whether u have posted the 15 th episode or not..
     
  8. sapthu02

    sapthu02 Gold IL'ite

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    15th is already in./
    i post stories mon - fri
     
  9. Arunarc

    Arunarc Moderator Staff Member IL Hall of Fame

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    This is a real cruel thing to do with any girl,
    This was a sad episode from kayal and sathya's point of view.
    Atleast Mithra understood and started her own life.
     
  10. SuccessMinded

    SuccessMinded Gold IL'ite

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    ohhh... now what? will sathya rescue her from this man?
     

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