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Loud Void

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by jskls, Apr 18, 2017 at 12:40 AM.

  1. jskls

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    Smile the flowers bring
    Now Smiles at her
    Searching for hers
    Sweetness the delicacies bring
    Now look at her
    Searching the taste in her
    Tasteless buds
    Soothing Music fails
    To emote any expression

    She stands there
    in bright light
    Still feels surrounded
    By Darkness
    Though in company
    All she could sense
    Is the loud void

    With Gaze that lost its stare
    Words that mean nothing
    Smile with no cheer
    Void that was left
    In a loved ones absence
    Engulfed her leaving
    Silence deep within
     
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    wonderfully penned lakshmi...Inspite of loud void..it echoes the emotions aloud.
    There is a beauty in stillness, if she could hear the purity of music in silence, the truth gets her a chance to be heard, her thoughts resonates in beauty of silence.
     
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    Dear Neetu
    I am truly delighted that my writing could fetch such a lovely feedback from you. So true, beauty of still mind in a chaotic world or purity of music in silence needs to be experienced. Thanks for your wonderful reply :)
     
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    Loud Voice is it, the inner one sounds very powerful - Bose amplifier is it ls :)
     
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