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Lost Love

Discussion in 'Snippets of Life (Non-Fiction)' started by mithila kannan, Aug 5, 2009.

  1. mithila kannan

    mithila kannan Gold IL'ite

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    I am not able to sleep
    You comethere in long strides
    With your 'kolynos' smile
    Please,don’t come in my dreams.

    I am not able to sleep
    You come there ,carrying a hibiscus flower
    which you know is my favourite flower
    Please, don’t come in my dreams.

    I am not able to sleep
    You come and whisper in my ear
    ‘Come let us run away’,I get up, you are not there
    Please, don’t come in my dreams.

    I am not able to sleep
    You are there wearing a garland
    I raise my neck to receive mine and look at the ceiling
    Please, don’t come in my dreams.

    I am not able to sleep
    We are there in heaven,surrounded by angels
    We swing on the rainbow,I suddenly fall below
    Please,don’t come in my dreams.

    I am not able to sleep
    We are doing satphere you holding my hand tight
    Suddenly I realize Iam all alone,the fire engulfing me
    Please,don’t come in my dreams.
     
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  2. SriVidya75

    SriVidya75 Platinum IL'ite

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    wonderful poem with deep meaning of hurt and rejection!! Good one
     
  3. mithila kannan

    mithila kannan Gold IL'ite

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    Ehank you,dear for undersanding the pain of a woman who fails in her love.
    love
    mithila
     
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    Coffeelover Platinum IL'ite

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    I thought this poem is about Love of God ( like Andal) until the last paragraph.
    Then i realized your poem. Last love is hard to let go.
    Great writer, Keep it up.
     
  5. mithila kannan

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    Dear coffeelover,
    what a morale booster you are.Thank you.
    It is better to have loved and lost than not to have loved ,eventhough the pain of lost love must be terrible at times.
    love
    mithila
     

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