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Life Positive

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Ashna, Oct 21, 2005.

  1. Ashna

    Ashna Bronze IL'ite

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    Life Positive

    Life is a puzzle,

    But don't get muddled,​
    Tread carefully,​
    And you will solve your troubles.​
    Don't get swayed ​
    by the waves of sorrow,​
    Just keep hoping ​
    for a better tommorrow.​
    Every dark cloud ​
    has a silver lining,​
    You just have to look ​
    where yours is lying.​
    Life is a game,​
    Which we all have to play.​
    Let us do our part to the best,​
    And leave to God the rest.​
     
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  2. shyamala87

    shyamala87 New IL'ite

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    Hi Ashna,

    Your poem about life is very nice.
     
  3. asma747

    asma747 Senior IL'ite

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    Hi Ashna,

    Very well written poem about life and the flow is also good.

    Read my poems also.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Asma
     
  4. kavisuresh

    kavisuresh Silver IL'ite

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    hi ashna,

    Very beautiful poem.
    do post more.
     
  5. bhanuleo

    bhanuleo Silver IL'ite

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    Good poem on life...
    Thanks for sharing Ashna!!!
     
    Last edited: Sep 12, 2009
  6. Nithu

    Nithu Gold IL'ite

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    Hi Ashna,
    Nice poem,
    taught us what life is
     

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