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Life Is Complete: A Short Story Of Realization

Discussion in 'Stories (Fiction)' started by CoolIndianGirl, Jun 29, 2016.

  1. CoolIndianGirl

    CoolIndianGirl Bronze IL'ite

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    HI Ladies,
    A common known disclaimer... My first attempt to write. Please bear my mistakes and provide your valuable feedback both positive and negative.

    In a beautiful city there lived a girl who was going through lots of abuse , issues and regrets in the name of love.Her so called friends didn't even ask her what she is going through neither anyone came forward to help her. What they had been doing is playing judging and guessing games and she has become their most favourite time pass. Funny part is these are all the same person who thinks they are immortal and talks about women rights , about women being abused and more than that they give world's expensive thing called advice in the forums.



    Again without drifting from our story this girl thought of running away from her problems and flew far away but karma is the biggest enemy. It searched for her and came back haunting her in foreign land. That is when she realized she was literally drowning in the puddle being tortured every day. All she could do was to cry every night thinking will there be a ray of hope in her life again.



    One fine day she saw a pair of eyes of most handsome guy who unfortunately was drowning in another puddle and no one to get him out of it. Everyone is still thinking that a girl is the one who is vulnerable to being abused in a relationship so none of his friends realize what this guy's been through. But our beautiful girl doesn't think so. She trusts him she understand him because she knows her own friends who still blame her for being misused and even thinks a girl leaving her love is a crime irrespective of how you are treated. Women's biggest enemy is another women. Funny is it. But that is the sad truth.



    Again coming back to the actual story as their eyes met each other and there rose a sun with full of hopes. Bright and shine. They decided to start their life together. Though they were ready to pull each other out of their puddle , they came to know the sad truth is some of the known human beings are pushing them back to the puddle again in name of moral.



    They almost lost their new found hope between the people throwing stones at them, lots of legs pushing them back their old life and lot of mouth talking dirty about them. When there was zero hope suddenly a few strong hands came forward together to help these lovely couples. With the blessing of these family and friends they both married each other finally on a auspicious day . On that day they realized what a friend means.



    As they started their happily ever after life they understood what friendship means what is the impact of people judging each other, what impact a simple rumor had on person life. But one thing they didn't understand was what really an unconditional love is. They both were really comfortable in each other arms they like each other but their past keeps haunting them which stopped them from realizing what they had for each other.



    Good people always have goodness in life. Soon they gave birth to a beautiful cuteness overloaded baby boy.When our hero touched the innocent baby when our heroine fed the pure little boy they realized what love is. As the boy grew up when he came crawling, running to them smiling calling mommy daddy they understood that the baby loves them unconditionally and all three unconditionally love each other and they finally got over the past behind the smile of little baby boy. They had a beautiful family, life and love that everyone would die for.



    This is not the end. A new problem came to their life now. when somebody asks them how is life going they didnt know what to answer. A simple happy will it even explain how they are, certainly not. They are more than that. Is there even a word to explain their life. As they kept thinking one fine day kush came to their life made them family of 3 to 4. Another baby boy. Now they had both handsome love and kush. As the hero and herione hug each other they told everyone life is complete. Thanks to all the friends who had been through their journey and helped them slowly building their nest.



    Moral of story: Please don't judge anyone. You really dunno what they are through.



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  2. Nithuashok2015

    Nithuashok2015 Bronze IL'ite

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    Hi @CoolIndianGirl , A very good attempt indeed!! A short, cute story with a nice message.. Keep writing :)
     
  3. Itsmylife143

    Itsmylife143 Platinum IL'ite

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    @CoolIndianGirl Nicely narrated!! Like the happy ending!! Justified the moral!!
     
  4. Rajiv

    Rajiv Gold IL'ite

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    Good one..yes, they rightly say "Dont judge a book by its cover"
     

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