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I Wanted You To Be Like

Discussion in 'Poetry' started by Tamrakshar, Dec 7, 2017.

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  1. Dec 8, 2017 #11
    Nonya

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    Yes, indeed....on the well written.
    Liquor brand names and drinking allegories are cleverly hidden in every stanza.
    I bet you were wondering (too?) whether the BloodyMary in the last stanza was made with White Lightning Vodka of the 2nd stanza.
     
    Nonya, Dec 8, 2017
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    ChennaiExpress

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    Oh wow I never heard of it.

    I just like the OP profile pic of bluebird :)
     
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    HazelPup

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    ha ha ... What a combination in the last line. enjoyed reading it. first time I am responding in this section ...
     
    HazelPup, Dec 8, 2017
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    Tamrakshar

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    Noyna, you are awesome!
     
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    Tamrakshar

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    :blush:
     
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